Week 18: Intersection: Location, Location, Location

[kschlotwrites]

"I can't believe you're breaking up with me over the phone, while I'm at the airport," came a tearful female voice from behind me.

Comments

[i_17bingo]

I like how this turned around at the end. It was empowering.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

[rayaso]

Great job with the dialog - both interior and the woman on the phone! I'm glad she let him have it so that his little plan to avoid her anger failed. The hopeful ending was also a good idea.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

A nice little rebound fling might be just what she needs. Or maybe it ends up being something more.

[beeker121]

Hopefully the ex being such an ass will allow her to move on all the quicker. I love that your narrator just listens in, honestly I think most folks would.

[kschlotwrites]

I definitely would! And later I would be telling my sister, "Guess what I heard today!"

[dmousey]

Seems like a little revenge romance is in order! Breaking up via text is cowardly. I liked how easily the dialogue flowed in this!hugs and peace~~~

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

[shadowwolf13]

LOL Her being happy without Greg is the best revenge. :)

[kschlotwrites]

That it is!