Week 19: Invitation

[kschlotwrites]

"Timmy, come back here where I can see you," I called to my energetic four-year-old at the playground, as I pushed his two-year-old sister in a swing

Comments

[i_17bingo]

Ooh! Suburban creepiness! I love it! Families that hang out all the time really weird me out.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

[dmousey]

It's a parental version of the Stepford Wives. I loved this! Deliciously creepy. Hugs and peace~~~

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

[penpusher]

The perfect families in the perfect setting. PERFECT!

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

[bleodswean]

EEEK! What a dark imaginative piece this is! You really built in the tone and maintained it throughout!

[kschlotwrites]

I've actually had this idea for years. I used to work at the carousel in the local mall, and would see Moms on play dates. I kept saying I would write about the "Moms of Twos," and I finally did!

[favoritebean]

Oh, this has such a creepy vibe to it. I love it.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!