Week 20: Open Topic

[kschlotwrites]

I'm out!

Comments

[ryl]

I love how Cassie gets mad when no one hears her calling. Cats are so easily offended, just like little teenagers. "You didn't let me in? FINE. Then I won't GO in! See how you like THAT!"

[kschlotwrites]

Oh my God, yes! You move their favorite blanket in anyway, and you get the cold shoulder.

[rayaso]

I'm glad this had a happy ending! Cassie's point of view was wonderful, as were her adventures. Alternating between the two of you worked really well. Good job!

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you. I was originally just going to write from Cassie's pov, but I got stuck. Alternating points of view helped it flow.

[penpusher]

I like how you weaved the two views of what was happening - definitely helped with the progression of the story and kept it engaging.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you! I had said this couple times (just now, catching up on comments), this originally was supposed to be all Cassie's pov. But I wasn't having luck that way.

[beeker121]

Whew, I'm glad the ending was a happy one. The back and forth between the two narrators kept this engaging throughout.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you! I'm glad for the happy ending, too! The house was so empty without her!

[marlawentmad]

The back and forth perspective is a great device! I relate too well, I lost my marbles when my sweet feline made her great escape. She was nonchalant as you please when I found her.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

Cats don't seem to care that you go through hell when they get out!