Fic: Life in Miniature Motion: Part Four (SGA: Wee!John)

May 06, 2009 23:26

Life in Miniature Motion
By Kyizi

Disclaimers etc in Part One

Previous Parts
| Part One | Part Two | Part Three |

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Part Four )

sga, wee!john, fic

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smileleigh June 20 2010, 23:46:31 UTC
I Wuv You!
I don't know how I missed this story when you finished it, I have read the snippets and loved them all. Reading this story, a culmination of all those stories and the ending of the story arc, made me happy, made me sad, made me laugh and even cry.
Thank you so much for sharing Wee!John with us and please add more snippets.

BTW.... "Glad to have you back, Johnny,” she whispers, so softly that Rodney barely hears her. A moment later, she pulls back and smirks at him. “Now that you’re you again, feel free to turn up to breakfast naked as often as you like.”... LOVE IT!!!

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kyizi June 21 2010, 10:29:54 UTC
Oh, thank you! This made me smile - I love that I still get reviews for it and I'm really glad you enjoyed. Thanks for taking the time to give feedback.

Heh, yeah, Cadman is awesome in all things! ;p

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sherry57 July 4 2010, 08:59:06 UTC
I started reading this on ff but liked it so much I couldn't wait for updates and came to your lj site to read more. I then read right to the end! I absolutely loved this. You turned me round from deperately wanting Sheppard back at the beginning to being really sad to lose John at the end. Finally, I wanted both John and Sheppard to be able to exist at the same time.
I loved all the relationships you showed in this story - Rodney with John, Lorne with John, Lorne with Rodney and all th einteraction between John and the others like Cadman, Carson, Miko.
Boy, this was an emotional rollercoaster, up to laughter and down to tears. I loved it to bits. And now I'm off to discover your other stories and if they give me half of the enjoyment this one did, I'll be a very happy bear! Thank you very much for a great read.

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kyizi July 24 2010, 13:30:18 UTC
God, this made my day! I've been kicked out of my flat (long story) for the moment, so I have no internet and logging in at Starbucks to find this? Yeah, made my day!

Glad you enjoyed and, yeah, I'm not awesome at keeping ff.net up to date. I try, but I keep forgetting.

Thank you so much for the feedback, I'm really glad you enjoyed and I appreciate that you took the time to tell me :)

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sherry57 July 24 2010, 15:01:15 UTC
I'm sorry to hear real life is being a bitch at the moment and although it's just a small thing, I'm glad my reviews gave you a little glimmer of sunshine in a grey patch. Having escaped from real life into your stories, I hope your real life situation gets better soon and that you have some outlet to escape to like your stories give me.... good luck!

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kyizi July 25 2010, 14:45:21 UTC
Yeah, it's being a total bitch. Am logged in at Starbucks again for a little while, but likely won't get back until next week :( I miss my internet!

I have other people's fic, which is good! I've been on a total Dean/Cas (Supernatural) kick lately, so I've been saving as much as I can to read offline! Along with a ton of Chloe/Oliver (Smallville) updates, I should be set!

Thanks again!

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sigrundora October 29 2010, 15:29:11 UTC
I am just discovering the SGA fandom and saw this verse recommended somewhere. Have spent the past 2 days reading the whole verse and I can say that I'm in love with it. Wee!John is adorable, especially when he's running around naked, and you made me tear up with your take on "Sunday". That episode just killed me.

I understand that it has been quite some time since you wrote this, but I would love to see more adventures or what the future holds for them.

Thank you :D

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kyizi February 1 2011, 23:46:01 UTC
Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed and I'm glad that you took the time to tell me. I really love that I'm one of your first introductions to the genre, because that can be a rare thing these days! I hope you've stumbled across some of the many wonderful fics out there that helped me discover my love for SGA.

The main reason there hasn't really been any movement on my LJ, writing or otherwise, is because I have been internetless since September! My blackberry only does me so far with checking things, so I've pretty much been AWOL for about 5 months. Today is me back online, so hopefully, after I settle in and manage to reign in my inboxes etc, I can think about fic again.

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duonoaikouka March 11 2011, 00:41:35 UTC
Wanted to let ya know I recced ya at stargateficrec. Thanks for the fun wee!John, fantastic father!Rodney, and wonderful exploration of Rodney's character and relationships. It was a fun read. :)

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kyizi March 12 2011, 21:20:16 UTC
Hi there! Strangely enough, the email that came in just before this comment notification was from loriel_eris with the words; 'OMG! GO! Look! Now!' and a link to your rec.

Thank you so much, I really appreciate both that you not only took the time to provide excellent feedback, but that you recommended this fic to other people. This story took a long time and a lot of work and it's really great to know that that has paid off.

Thank you so much.

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rock_mafia May 21 2011, 00:08:41 UTC
Oh sweet baby J.

“He wasn’t my son,” Rodney says, needs to hear himself say it, even if he doesn’t really believe it. Because, for the last few years, that’s exactly what John was to him. He may have started trying to think of the boy as Sheppard’s son, but, at some point, Rodney knows that John became his.

“Yeah, he was.” Evan clears his throat. “And sometimes, I let myself think he was mine, too.”

TEARS IN MY FECKING EYES OVER THAT!

I've read this whole series and I think it's so freaking amazing! I absolutely loved your portrayal of Lorne (who's badass anyway), but your Rodney completely broke my heart.

AMAZING JOB, EVEN THOUGH I AM SOBBING!

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kyizi June 11 2011, 13:01:14 UTC
Thank you for your awesome feedback. I'm really glad you enjoyed this and I really appreciate that you took the time to let me know.

Thanks!

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