*Don't Touch* Chapters 9 and 10!!!

Mar 06, 2008 02:18

 
Title: Don't Touch
Author: Kimberly <= that’s me!

Beta: aniffa
Chapter: 9/??

Rating: NC-17 (<- maybe, not completely sure)
Warnings: Overall: Smut and Rape (not in this chapter though)
Disclaimer: I do Not!
Pairings: AoiXUruha (main)ReitaXUruha (one-sided kinda)ReitaXRuki (onsided)KaiXMiyavi (girl!miyavi)
Synopsis: When Uruha comes to a new school he is ( Read more... )

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bloody_story March 6 2008, 10:54:42 UTC
Ooow ! I hope after this little fuck behind the school Reita will leave Uruha alone >o<
Fight Uruha è_é !! XD
Ruki is a little slut o_o XD
I'm hurry to read the next update ! =)

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kymb3rly March 6 2008, 10:59:06 UTC
awww, Ruki's not a slut... come on, If Reita came up to you and wanted to f*** you... you wouldn't agree? Don't even try to deny it.

I would!

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bloody_story March 6 2008, 11:08:19 UTC
LMAO nope i wouldn't cause i don't really like Reita o_o (his mouth is awful XD) but i would be like "can you introduce me your friends 8D"

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kymb3rly March 6 2008, 13:17:18 UTC
OMG! Rei's mouth is so cute,
so is Uru's!
Rei would be my favorite from Gazette, had Aoi not been so sexy!

Your like the first person to tell me you don't like him. *drops jaw* I don't really like kai, to be honest.

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onariah March 6 2008, 11:08:33 UTC
Yes Uha has suffered enough... well he hasn't but I don't want a rape, I want an happy ending lol

I hope Rei will realize Ruki is best for him... why does he want to break Uru so badly in the first place????

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kymb3rly March 6 2008, 20:08:46 UTC
He's just fun to mistreat ^_^ Thanks for reading!

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aniffa March 6 2008, 12:57:09 UTC
This was awesome! Am I evil for saying please go ahead with the rape scene?

It's so sad that Ruki would betray his Reita. You know how I feel about Reituki ;)

Keep up the good work Sweety!!

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aniffa March 6 2008, 13:01:38 UTC
Arg! Major typo there! I ment to say It's so sad that Ruki would betray Uruha.

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kymb3rly March 6 2008, 20:11:52 UTC
I kinda figured that... i really forgot to comment on your last update. Sorry *bows* ! I'll go do it now. I think as far as it's gonna get is attempted rape... But I do need some advice so i'll go comment, then email you! ^_^

I want the rape scene as much as you do... it would be hot. But I dont think the story is going to have a good ending at this point if he goes through with it!

Reituki = <3<3<3

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myra_heart_pon March 6 2008, 13:03:27 UTC
baaad ruki!!!!!! but yay!!! 2 chapters in 1!!! what a package deal! haha! LOL. please update soon!!!

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kymb3rly March 6 2008, 19:15:56 UTC
will try hard ^-^

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myra_heart_pon March 7 2008, 11:17:33 UTC
I'll cheer you on!!! \^o^/

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andwipe March 6 2008, 13:19:58 UTC
Reita is mean ;;____;;
now when he wants Ruki he can leave Uruha alone!

thanks for updating so fast (Y)

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kymb3rly March 6 2008, 19:16:37 UTC
Everyone picks on Rei T_T That evil bastard. *giggle*

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