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KHR Fic- The Sweetest Misery

Mar 19, 2010 21:34

Title- The Sweetest Misery
Author - Kyradesu
Rating - PG-13(?) for suicide
FF.net Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5827068/1/
Pairing - Tsuna/Kyoko & hinted 5986
Warnings - Suicide. Or not. Depends on which way you want to take it.
Summary - Haru is in love. But Haru is also delusional.

( It is something that she dearly wishes will become a reality...no, in fact it is something that she has already convinced herself will inevitably come true in the future. There is not a shadow of a doubt in her mind. Haru trusts her heart, and that’s all there is to it. )

fanfic, khr

Comments 8

akumugan March 19 2010, 20:17:35 UTC

LOVE YOUR totallynotcraptastic FIC!!! :) Het is not written often and I leap at the ones that are written. This is no sad, but it's so beautifully written. I-i like the alternate ending...Gokudera must be her knight in shining armor. B| MUST.

kyradesu March 20 2010, 06:26:37 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you like it ^_^ i agree that it's so sad there ist more het arround...but with the number of males compared to females in the series, it isn't surprising xP

And yes!! He must be! because I am 5986 baised!

rinhail March 19 2010, 22:39:35 UTC

Beautiful take on Haru. You really pinned her feelings for Tsunayoshi and Tsuna/Kyoko down well. Excellent writing, too. :)

kyradesu March 20 2010, 06:29:45 UTC

Thank you ^_^ I was afraid i'd writen an OOC Haru because I don't really think she'd resort to something like suicide. But then again she's so obsessed with tsuna...you never know!

k4gh March 20 2010, 01:23:18 UTC

Love it~
Also loved the alternate ending better. Not because I'm being biased as a 5986 fan lol. Nice fic~

kyradesu March 20 2010, 06:31:32 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

I actually like the 5986 ending better too, cause it's less sad XD

come_home_laika March 20 2010, 08:11:33 UTC

I adore a good Haru fic, because she gets them so rarely, and I really love that you put so much effort into figuring out her thought process here, instead of making her just a ditz which is sometimes cute, but not that accurate. I think my favorite line was this: "Haru is in love. But she is also delusional.", because it stuck in my head throughout the story, and made the ending seem more eerie. This fic=totally not crap-tastic.

kyradesu March 20 2010, 08:20:51 UTC

Thank you! ^_^ I really think Haru dosent get enough love. She does act kinda ditzy most of the time, but that isnt all there is to her, which is kinda what I wanted to show in the fic. Although I'm not sure it really worked...

And thanks for reassuring me that the fic isnt crap-tastic Me and my self-esteem issues XP