Comments | kyrafic: Fic: 10 Ways to Prove You're Not Gay (The 40 Year Old Virgin, David/Cal)

kyrafic

Fic: 10 Ways to Prove You're Not Gay (The 40 Year Old Virgin, David/Cal)

Jan 06, 2009 09:57

My Yuletide fic!

10 Ways to Prove You're Not Gay
The 40 Year Old Virgin

David/Cal. Hard R. Written for epshlan in Yuletide 2008. Thanks much to annakovsky for co-brainstorming. Also online at the Yuletide archive.

( You know how I know you're gay? )

yuletide

Comments 11

subterrain January 6 2009, 16:22:47 UTC

I cannot even tell you how hard I love this story. So great, so perfect, so hilarious. I love that Cal is a novelist. I love it when Paula says horrible things. I love Jay bugging out. Mostly, I just love it entirely, holy shit.

elendraug January 6 2009, 23:41:34 UTC

HOT. FUNNY. VERY IN-CHARACTER. VERY VERY HOT.

I love how you managed to include practically every character in the movie ♥ ALL the employees at SmartTech, Amy and her friends, everybody :> it made me smile! Too frequently in fic (and I do this, too, so I know D8) people focus too much on the characters who are paired up and don't pay enough attention to the others, but you've done a fantastic job here of striking that perfect balance. Great job!

I've always liked Beth, I dunno :V she didn't seem out of the ordinary to me, despite how much they talk about her being "kinky." Her telling them what to do at the end there = holy shit ffffffffff ♥

ALSO REALLY GLAD TO SEE SOMEONE POSTING ON THIS COMMUNITY. It makes me happy. Great way to kick off the Pineapple-Express-Came-Out-Today celebration, too!

EDIT: and by this community I meant apatowfic. I was too dumb to look at where I was posting a comment to D8 durf.

lye January 7 2009, 04:03:03 UTC

Amazing! I really love this. So funny, so perfectly paced, and everyone was just dead on. This was such a treat, thank you for sharing!

honey_wheeler January 8 2009, 08:25:58 UTC

So your Mooj voice is a thing of beauty aaaaaand I think you should write a sequel about his life and times. I would quote at you, but there's TOO MUCH TO QUOTE. Just imagine I copied and pasted the whole thing in this comment and then said "LOLOL." 'Cause that's what I did: LOLOLed.

Also, dude, writing really IS a bloodsport.

wauw. perfectillusi0n January 16 2009, 14:22:44 UTC

never thought about this paring. ever.
but this was amazing!
i loved it!