life goes on (3/3)

Jan 03, 2011 01:42

Title: life goes on (3/3)
Pairing: KyuHae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: drama, angst, romance, au
Word Count: 2300+

Part 3 )

kyuhae, donghae, kyuhyun

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kyudreamz39 January 3 2011, 18:44:14 UTC
Thank you so much~ <3

Well it took me a while to finish, and when I did, I felt like I should be moving things around and/or changing them, so I didn't really want to post it ... I don't know, to me it didn't feel that complete. (haha I have to go re-read my whole fic to see if I change my mind now XD)

awww thank you - you have me squealing at your comment :P

(I love wayyyy too many pairings too - mainly Kyu pairings >.>)

Thank you so so so much for reading and commenting, and Happy New Year!~

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kyudreamz39 January 3 2011, 20:26:54 UTC
you can never love Kyu too much ^_~
wow you basically outlined my favourite Kyu pairings too XD

I'm adding you~ Hi :)

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serenesea January 3 2011, 14:16:32 UTC
This is such an adorable story though there is sadness. The beginning seems a little rushed, but it's getting better and better, and I love Part 3! I like how you depict their college and dorm life, and I love how Kyuhyun and Donghae support and comfort each other along the way. What Kyuhyun said to Donghae about the immortality of his father is really thoughtful and sweet! <3

Thanks for this lovely story, and happy new year to you too! =)

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serenesea January 3 2011, 14:22:35 UTC
P.S. I'd be thrilled to death if Kyuhyun sings lullabies to me, but since I am not Donghae, I guess I just have to settle with the CDs LOL

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kyudreamz39 January 3 2011, 18:57:39 UTC
LOL someone did catch the odd patches of rushing that I had ... but by the end of it I almost wanted to give up, and that made me mad at myself (I mean, I had to think that after 5000 words???) so I fixed it as much as possible and decided to let it be. Maybe I'll go back later (now that I'm actually done) and go alter some things >.>

I didn't really want to sound patronizing or offensive to anyone who may have had someone dear to them die, so I tried to imagine what it would be like for me - it ended up sounding (as Kyu said) corny. *sigh*

Thank you for reading :) ~~~

(OMG Kyu singing lullabies to me would leave me floating on cloud nine in ecstasy forever, but the CDs would have to do for now XD)

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joccusaba January 3 2011, 20:46:41 UTC
hey. this was really amazing. sad and beautiful. tnx for sharing..

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kyudreamz39 January 3 2011, 20:52:45 UTC
omg someone called my fic beautiful ~~~ *prances around joyfully*

Thank you for reading!!

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ngocmai207 January 4 2011, 03:22:29 UTC
Wow, your fic just makes my day, like honestly ( ... )

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kyudreamz39 January 4 2011, 03:45:30 UTC
I have quite the soft spot for KyuHae - they're just so sweet :3

Aww I hope your DVD comes soon~ urgh tell me about it - school starts tomorrow and I really really really X100 don't want to go TT____TT

Writing the beginning part was ... kinda painful to be honest cause angst isn't something I deal well with, but I started with it and then just forged through.

hehe I liked writing that part - I imagined my reaction and toned it down a few thousand times (I would've been infinitely more flaily and incoherent) XD

Kyu singing me to sleep is my most earnest desire EVER. I'd just melt into a puddle and keep him hostage forever~~~ *dreams*

Thank you so sooo much for reading and commenting! ♥

can't decide if I should be blushing like mad or running around in circles at your awesome comment =P

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nabiyun January 4 2011, 11:20:45 UTC
THIS IS PERFECTION

I could go on and on describing different parts of this perfection,but I think that this one sentence says it all.

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kyudreamz39 January 4 2011, 16:53:24 UTC
Why is everyone here trying to make me blush? I'm probably still red after reading the comments last night >.>

Thank you soooo much for reading!~

(perfection is a word I like a lot :3)

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