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ACQUISITION REQUEST
Name: Fab BLU Spy
Origin: "Dust Bowl", Badlands, USA 1961
Elegy Residence: Unit 214 Gigue Hall
Item Description:  Between the first time I was here and now I was sent back to my original barracks.  Somehow between then and now I was sent back but left behind my cigarette case.  It is a silver cigarette case that is able to hold 7 ( Read more... )

CHARACTER NAME: Fabien "Spy" Devereux
FANDOM: Team Fortress 2
AGE: 39
Teacher: Guidance Counselor/French Class

HISTORY: Born in the city of Montpelier in France the boy known as Fabien was born illegitimately to an opera singer. His first few years as a newborn and toddler were spent behind the stage of French opera houses listening to the music and ( Read more... )