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vegas1024 September 4 2011, 06:58:37 UTC
yay you finished it! i was so excited when i saw this show up in my inbox!

it was wonderful. i knew you wouldn't make it easy on them, but it worked so well. loved reading it! <333

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l_awlietxoxx September 4 2011, 07:13:52 UTC
I did finish it! \o/ And I feel soooo accomplished for doing so. :) I'm glad you thought the ending worked. Thanks for your comments all along the way. :) They mean a lot!

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puska_baby September 4 2011, 10:01:38 UTC
What a great way to end this. I loved every minute of it. I liked how you didn't make it all happy the minute they got away from the palace, I liked how you brought all those issues out, of course Adam would have mixed feelings about being intimate.

Congrats on such an amazingly, different story. It really had me engrossed, and now every time I see that pic of Adam with the incense, I'll think of this. :)

Do you have any more ideas up your sleeve? I know you're busy with college, but I'd love to read more from you. :) Thanks for writing such a great fic. :)

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l_awlietxoxx September 6 2011, 05:08:55 UTC
Yep, the boys still had some tough things to work through even once they were free of the palace. I'm glad you were so engrossed and you enjoyed it! And I definitely think of my verse here every time I see that picture. :3 Thanks for reading!

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nolechica September 4 2011, 10:51:12 UTC
Whoa, that was like a mini fic unto itself. Kris was ttotally justified and I'm glad they worked it out. Curious what punishment the Pharaoh would have chosen, but otherwise, nice tying up loose ends.

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l_awlietxoxx September 6 2011, 05:09:30 UTC
Thank you :) and lol yeah, that was a whopper of a chapter!

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traptrunaway08 September 4 2011, 11:34:49 UTC
What an amazing ending to an amazing story. I don't have the words.
Just thank you!!

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l_awlietxoxx September 6 2011, 05:10:59 UTC
omg no, thank YOU! :3

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traptrunaway08 September 6 2011, 16:21:24 UTC
You are very welcome!!:)

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l_awlietxoxx September 6 2011, 05:11:33 UTC
Thank you so much. :) That really means a lot to me.

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