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mynameright2 September 4 2011, 16:06:31 UTC
I...LOVED IT *squee* im kind of fond of the dark stuff heh heh... i dunno it's weird. My favorite scene was probably the one where Adam was in the palace and did the presentation or whatever on the table and knocked over the dude in his chair XD

i like him in a position where it seems he would be helpless but he still uses his talents to tell people to go to hell and you write that well ;) If there's a sequel i would be so happy!!! if not id understand

great job bb!!!

<3

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l_awlietxoxx September 6 2011, 05:13:22 UTC
haha no, it's not weird! The scene where he's on the table was totally one of my favorite scenes too. I remember I had the Amsterdam show in mind while writing it. :P
Not sure about a sequel or anything yet. If there is, I'll be posting about it in my journal first. Thanks for reading! :)

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jbslash September 4 2011, 21:13:29 UTC
I enjoyed this immensly and it was definitely worth the wait. No easy resolution for Adam and Kris but that made the end more satisfying. Kudos!

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l_awlietxoxx September 6 2011, 05:13:39 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!

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twistedssis September 5 2011, 04:48:58 UTC
Congratulations on completing this wonderful story. I loved the way you introduced the complexities of both main characters and the way you allowed them to explore themselves and each other at various points throughout the story. With so many twists and turns I wasn't sure that Adam and Kris would end up together, especially near the end when they were having so many difficulties having a "regular" life. But you let them work through their very complicated issues and tied up all the loose ends, too. Great job and many thanks for the happy ending!

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l_awlietxoxx September 6 2011, 05:15:03 UTC
I'm really glad it came through that BOTH of them were growing as characters. Adam may have more a ~dramatic~ story, but Kris had his own things to work through too.
There's no way I could have done anything but a happy ending, haha I haaate sad endings.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!

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karenmitchell September 5 2011, 08:54:18 UTC
Hey bb. I really enjoyed this fic. It has been something different to others here. I hope toy keep writing. <3

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l_awlietxoxx September 6 2011, 05:15:24 UTC
Thank you :))

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cunningdeb September 5 2011, 18:19:04 UTC
This has been a fantastic story and you've made a fan of me.

ArchiveofOurOwn seems to have lots of completed stories posted.

Cheers
Deb <333

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l_awlietxoxx September 6 2011, 05:16:50 UTC
I signed up for the waitlist for an account on ArchiveofOurOwn but it doesn't look like I'll be able to get an account before the end of the month. >.> Thanks for the suggestion though. :)
So awesome to hear I have fans. :D I hope to write more things that you'll enjoy just as much! :)

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