I am poem

[l_valentine]

I am a thunderstorm
Brewing
Bitter and strong;
Drink me
Like a pot of coffee.
Try and soften my power,
Sugar?
I will sweep you up;
A passionate spiral
Caressing and kissing and stinging
You with my rain-
drop tears

Comments

[mmmrorschach]

I really like this one. Especially the beginning...and the ending.

[l_valentine]

Thankyou. ^^

We had to write 'I am' poems in my creative writing course and this kind of sprung onto the page.