Comments | lacombe: LJ Idol Topic 6: Urban Legends

lacombe

LJ Idol Topic 6: Urban Legends

Dec 14, 2007 09:39

“It’s like traveling with the vanishing hitchhiker,” Miran said, as his hand clenched the steering wheel. He watched the traffic with a steely gaze that told Soliva he was holding something back. Wind buffeted the car out of the lane as they drove; she listened for a while in silence, absorbing the peaceful feeling of someone else being in ( Read more... )

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1_rhiannon_1 December 14 2007, 15:48:20 UTC

Excellent! This one has a way of just reaching up and grabbing you and saying "Pay attention dammit!" Great work!

lacombe December 14 2007, 15:50:55 UTC

Yeah, fog on a window will do that to you. ;-)

1_rhiannon_1 December 14 2007, 16:34:16 UTC

Indeed! ;-)

lacombe December 14 2007, 16:45:05 UTC

::: laughs :::

I'll be online next on Sunday. You? I miss ya.

echo8907 December 14 2007, 16:17:07 UTC

beautiful.

“You’d like to ride in stranger’s cars all day long?”

Soliva looked at him, disappointed. “He moves. He exists to touch lives, to see their places. They give him kindness and he gives companionship. Nothing more. He’s surrounded by the world and is allowed to just be. It’s a beautiful way to live.“

lacombe December 14 2007, 16:22:21 UTC

Thanks so much!

Do you vote? I have a feeling this is going to be a rough week.

Oh, and I haven't forgotten about the religion conversation, even though it's been a month. I'm going to think about and respond to that soon.

tiffgale December 14 2007, 16:42:18 UTC

That is a a great entry. It is the best I have seen so far in idol.

lacombe December 14 2007, 16:45:36 UTC

Thanks, Tiff! :-) I'm glad you're here!

tiffgale December 14 2007, 16:48:50 UTC

No promblem. You got my vote and you will always get my vote. I miss ya.

lindalee_ December 14 2007, 19:05:32 UTC

Wow! This one's on a whole 'nother level!! Very nice work ;-)

lacombe December 14 2007, 19:11:08 UTC

Thanks so much! It's a little risky, but it seems to be doing OK in the polls so far. Did you get my e-mail the other day? (If so, please keep all responses vague! ;-) )

lindalee_ December 14 2007, 19:58:20 UTC

Yes, got it-- will respond next week after I have a chance to think about what you said.

lacombe December 14 2007, 20:01:56 UTC

Awesome- I really appreciate that. :-) Just wanted to make sure.

genesisdesire December 14 2007, 19:16:11 UTC

Utterly lovely. I wonder what my novel characters would have to say about some of the Idol topics, and this was a refreshing approach to the topic. Everyone knows that legend, but you gave it a soul through this character. Made me shiver a bit.

lacombe December 14 2007, 19:20:38 UTC

:-) What a nice thing to say! I was trying to be different. I really appreciate that! Do you have anything from your characters posted on your LJ? It'd be interesting to read!