Think hope.

[lacruciverbiste]

         She knew it wouldn't be long before they found her. Found her escape route: the doors to the patio flung open, the sheer white curtains swirling in the bright blue light of the afternoon breeze.

The sun was sinking low over the wash of white houses on the western hills. Effie hobbled across smoothed stones and made her way

Comments

[musicrocks987]

Awesome!!!!!
This piece of writing kept me interested the entire time. nothing could disract me away from reading it!
=)

Best of Luck!

OoO~Stuck in the Stars~OoO

[csigeekfan]

Extremely well written. I like how you create the place so well. I could picture myself on a Greek island, a walkway down the banks to the sea, and just drifting along with Effie. I could feel her attraction - her love affair - with the sea.

Very well done.

[lacruciverbiste]

thank you. i really appreciate it! is yours up for reading?

[csigeekfan]

Yes. I just posted mine today.

[attentionhoard]

I am a really, really really big fan of this piece.

Awesome job!

[triplescorpio]

You did an awesome bit of writing on this. And I love your incorporation of the prompt. Excellent. Good luck!

[intermezzo_poet]

The imagery in this is GORGEOUS. I was absolutely entranced by it throughout the entire piece. Nice work!