Title: And Whisper You to This Earth
Author: Lady E
Beta: J
Rating: R
Pairing: Erestor/Halbarad
Warnings: none
Request: I'd like something a little off the beaten path: Any canon Elf-- except Legolas!-- with Halbarad or Imrahil. Characterization is key; I'd much rather read good characterizations than plot-driven prose. If you can manage both, I'
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You seem to have a great skill in ensuring the reader conjures perfectly what it is you're meaning to convey in your writing. This is but a tiny example:
"Halbarad stares at a flame as it catches a dry twig. Light passes his face and fades away as the flame dies."
I could almost hear the twig crackling in the fire, and see the glow on his face as the shades of dusk settle in the distance beyond.
So Beautiful!
Thankyou for sharing this story.
aylith
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Thanks,
Cathleen
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