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[Fanfic] In the Dark {Chapter 9: The Fallen}

Jan 24, 2010 18:49

Title: In The Dark {Chpt. 9: The Fallen}
Author: Roxy (lady_monochrome)
Pairing(s): MinJae, YunJae, YooSu, HoSu, Yunho x Boa
Length: Chapter 9 of 15
Word Count: 6,402
Genre: AU, Drama, Mystery, Suspense, Psychological
Rating: R
Warning(s): Serial murder, explicit crime scenes, fucked up sociopathic individuals, drug abuse and prostitution.

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Comments 39

neoreulwonhae January 25 2010, 00:19:41 UTC

Hey! This is kind of OT but I came across this post (I really want to read it too, when I can find the time!), and I was wondering if you had the original picture from your "Fuck off!" GD icon. It's hilarious. XD

lady_monochrome January 25 2010, 00:36:44 UTC

It is kinda out of the blue xDD I do have the original but I'm not in my own computer right now. When I get it I'll post you the link ~__^

neoreulwonhae January 25 2010, 05:39:28 UTC

Thanks! :D

irene014 January 25 2010, 01:43:36 UTC

well shit just hit the fan. things are starting to worst, and Yunho is just constantly fucking everything up, damn ._.

poor Jae though I'm glad that Yunho didn't "rape" Jaejoong but still T_____T
I cannot help but fear for Boa and Aeyoung lives now that Boa knows whats going on now

can't wait to find out what happens next
oh yeah and new reader btw ^^v

lady_monochrome January 25 2010, 15:11:42 UTC

Yay!! New reader ^_^ Welcome to the twisted world of In the Dark. *bows*

Things can only get worse before they get better but. . . thing don't necessarily work the regular way in my story xD We'll see what happens from here to chapter 15.

Thank you so much for giving my fic a shot and commenting ^__^ hope I don't disappoint with the rest.

crazyfantasia January 25 2010, 01:59:59 UTC

late spot?

lady_monochrome January 25 2010, 15:12:00 UTC

Very late woman!! lol *huggles*

crazyfantasia January 28 2010, 02:40:13 UTC

Baby, don't be mad at me, I WILL COMMENT!

UHH....YOU'RE SO GONNA KILL ME.

ting5 January 25 2010, 02:02:37 UTC

Yunho is really the killer?!?! I'm confused..but I guess in time I'll know..

lady_monochrome January 25 2010, 15:14:46 UTC

xD Oh but dahling, I had already revealed Yunho as the murderer in chapter 3 teehee. My intention was for everyone to know about Yunho from the get-go so that the drama is more about the characters in themselves than the "who-done-it?" of the murders.

Either way things will only become more clear from here on. ^_^ If you have any question don't hesitate to ask.

Thank you for the comment. Much love <3

ting5 January 26 2010, 00:00:12 UTC

*grins sheepishly* I just went to re-read..hehhe I'm sorry I can be such a klutz and forgetful..LOL ignore me random realization XDD

So now is the matter that Min wanna find evidence against Yunho and wants Jae's help..anyway I'll be looking forward to your update (Hmm from the HoSu talk, does Su knows I mean why is he arranging Yunho meeting with a woman?) Okay if it's gonna be a spoiler dont ans me *grins*

dily3112 January 25 2010, 02:22:34 UTC

omg!!!! so much happened in this chapter!!!!!!
I have no idea want to say. Omg im like so into the story please...update soon!!!!! This chapter...........to good. and Junsu's little outburst with Yunho to funny!!!

“Fuck you Yunho! I’ll raise my voice if I want to. I’m demanding something here and I’m demanding right now that I want to have both you and Jae in the same bed, naked, with me included this time!”

My favorite line!!!

lady_monochrome January 25 2010, 15:17:37 UTC

I know right O__O I have no idea how I manage to put so much in there in so relatively little. But I guess this is the turning point chapter here. ^_^ From no on it's a roller-coaster of incidents and happenings.

Hahahahaha, Junsu is wack here xDD who would've thought I would make my bias be such a crazy man whore. lol But I <3 his character, I'm glad you enjoy him.

Thank you for the comment.