[Fanfic] In the Dark {Chapter 9: The Fallen}

[lady_monochrome]

Title: In The Dark {Chpt. 9: The Fallen}
Author: Roxy (lady_monochrome)
Pairing(s): MinJae, YunJae, YooSu, HoSu, Yunho x Boa
Length: Chapter 9 of 15
Word Count: 6,402
Genre: AU, Drama, Mystery, Suspense, Psychological
Rating: R
Warning(s): Serial murder, explicit crime scenes, fucked up sociopathic individuals, drug abuse and prostitution.

Summary

Comments

[be_ddelusionall]

sooooo should be doing homework. read this all, wow wow and WOW. What a show!
It's amazing! I ♥♥♥ it so much!

the part with Jae and Changmin made me cry. *huggles Jaejoong*

but omg Yunho, you effing bastard!!! (*giggles* you have Yunho as the bad guy. in my fics, Yunho is ALWAYS the bad guy :) ) Just wait. One day, Jaejoong will have you trussed up with duct tape (please see icon).

[lady_monochrome]

Traci~ <3

Woo~~! I'm so happy you like this since I love your stories and all. ^__^ *bows*

Aaaww Jae and Changmin were probably the hardest part to write in this chapter. It's what took me the longest since I wanted to portray all those deep-seeded feelings for the dead sister and Changmin's desire to help Jae but solve his investigation at the same time. And I'm still not satisfied with the end result 100% but I hope you liked it =D

LOL you know I was thinking that when I was reading your fics lol We like to make Yunho the bad guy, he just has potential xDD Oh the things Jae will do after that duck tape is in place *day dreams* You'll see, I'll write something about that!!! lol

Thanks so much for reading and commenting ;) <3

[roseltv]

I feel scared now. The one with money is not as scary as the one with power. I hope Yunho doesn't have a spy in the police office coz I don't feel very good with TOP leaving Changmin's side. Also, does Yunho know that the victim he killed was Jae's sis? And it's very confusing for me with Yunho's reason of killing, it seems like he has a sick mind that he's helping the world by killing the whores, but then what about Junsu and Jae?

[lady_monochrome]

"The one with money is not as scary as the one with power."

I completely agree and further more, the one with both is even scarier.

Ha HA, I'll ask your question in reverse. Do you think Yunho knows that he killed one of Jae's sisters? Seeing all he already knows about Jae...? ^_^

About Yunho's character: Plain and simply he's a psychopath. If I were to explain how psychos think it would be "They think the way Yunho thinks." Well at least some of them right? Others have even worse thoughts or milder. But in general they feel no fear, no remorse, morals aren't part of their vocabulary or their existence. They are called by Criminologists "The monsters of society" because they can't grasp social constructs, they don't care about law or rules, they live in their own outlaw world. So can you understand him now?

Thanks for the comment ^_^

[hoppine]

Wow. Junsu's Yunho's accomplice. Who would've guessed lol. Here I was too, just thinking he was overly eccentric. Great chapter and good luck with your studies. I'll be keeping my eye out for the next chapter, but until then I'll be content re-reading this fic XD....And one last thing: YUNHO IS SO FUCKING COOL! XD. I love that sociopath! I feel bad for Jae...but I (and I don't know quite why) love to see him suffer and since Yuho's doing such a great job, I just have to love that crazy man XD....and actually that was two things, but I am done rambling now :)

[lady_monochrome]

Hehehe, glad you noticed that ~_^ *gives cookies* Junsu is a bit of a complex character isn't he? It's fun writing him xD

Yay! Thank you *bows* I'm flattered that you liked this chapter so much and like re-reading the fic. ^///^ It's a big compliment for me.

LOL Don't worry, I kinda like seeing Jae suffer too. *stoned* I'm just that much of an angst fan. Yunho's the perfect guy to make him suffer >:D

Thanks for the rant!! lol <3

[shanancelice]

So many things happen in this chapter... Knowing what he had done to Jae that night, I cant help but think Yunho sure had *special* mind :I

Boa is really a brave woman and she did a great help here. I hope nothing will happen to them D:... Even with so many evidences, it did not seem easier to catch Yunho (who had both money and power)

[lady_monochrome]

His mind is something very hard to understand :/ It's hard to write it sometimes too. Gotta think without regarding my emotions about the matter.

Boa's certainly brave, now let's hope the evidence found at the moment is enough to issue an arrest warrant. At least it's enough to question the Senator down at the department ;)

Thank you for the comment dear.

[ekkusuchan]

eeps! jae is asleep in boa's house and changminnie is going away... i do not like the sound of this, no i don't. *prays that boa stays in the house til jae wakes up and leaves*

[lady_monochrome]

O____O We'll have to see what happens won't we? *suspense music*

Thanks for tuning in xDD watch out for the next episode of "In the Dark" *theme music*

Ok, enough silly what the fuckery. Thank you for the comment ^__^