[Fanfic] In the Dark {Chapter 9: The Fallen}

[lady_monochrome]

Title: In The Dark {Chpt. 9: The Fallen}
Author: Roxy (lady_monochrome)
Pairing(s): MinJae, YunJae, YooSu, HoSu, Yunho x Boa
Length: Chapter 9 of 15
Word Count: 6,402
Genre: AU, Drama, Mystery, Suspense, Psychological
Rating: R
Warning(s): Serial murder, explicit crime scenes, fucked up sociopathic individuals, drug abuse and prostitution.

Summary

Comments

[kimheechulmiki]

I love this! Finally its out at least to ChangMin. both his and Boa's worst nightmares came true.
I want to shoot that bastard JungYunHo! Oh but you write his evilness so well! Now everyone will hate him more!! *grins evilly*

Jae Joong is very lucky to have such a supportive and loving lover like ChangMin. Hope he gets through this.

Thank you for the update!

[lady_monochrome]

YAY! It's loved! *dances*

It's been a tough case but finally a lead!! *hallelujah music* We'll see what the detectives are cooking up and what Yunho will do now >D

*sighs* I wish I had such a wonderful lover *reaches for Detective Minnie*

Thank you for the lovely comment dear ^__________^

[despair26]

yayyyy ♥
this chapter was too short
no, lol :P
yuussss. i love when things start coming together. yunho is such a badass evil dude. love it. and i love junsu for being such a slut.

[lady_monochrome]

>__> "Chapter 9 you are under arrest for lack of length. You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law. You have the right to an attorney if you don't have one the state shall provide one for you." >D Justice has been served. *lame*

Woohoo! More kudos for psycho!Ho, isn't he just a conniving bastard? *pets* Su xD he's an ubber slut and he just loves the bad boys~

Thank you for the comment!! ^_^

[pawshingo]

Wow! So much development in this chapter! I'm glad you didn't drag the part where Jae refuses to tell what happened. He should trust Changmin and he does! Hope Boa will be safe. Yunho might think she knows too much and kills her off!

[lady_monochrome]

I hadn't realized how much I had put into this chapter until all you told me xD Gotta love my readers.

I'm glad I didn't drag that part out either. There was too much important stuff happening for him to be a whiny baby for too long. Now we're getting close to closing the case \O/ *excited* For now let's hope Boa can act her part.

Thanks for the love ^_^

[padmik]

holy -beep- OvO

ugh so glad yunho didn't do anything too bad to jae but that still doesn't help jae's case. and now they have a big lead and everything but of course, politicians and their waves of power. oh i hope boa doesn't do anything too suspicious around yunho. it'll mess everything up right away.

and... junsu just makes me so mad with his naiveity =.= threesomes and whatnot. that--he's not even a man. idk what he is. and i'm assuming that he's the one passing out victims unknowingly to yunho? wow, junsu is so deep into this. yoochun would explode if he knew the truth. i can't even--i want to strangle junsu lol.

[lady_monochrome]

Careful there, I don't want the censorship boards trolling my fic xD *stoned*

That's the unfortunate result of corruption. Plus no one would've ever suspected of Yunho.

If Yoochun found out about Junsu's stuff with Yunho (aside from the sex and all) he would certainly want to strangle Junsu too. He's just a very odd character, gotta love him, gotta hate him.

Thank's for the comment <3

[anihimesama]

gosh!
this is so intense!
i love boa's character here,she's so strong at heart.

and i hope jae knows the truth bout "that"night.

update soon,please. .

[lady_monochrome]

Yay! *dances* I'm glad you like Boa's character. I always meant for her to be the strong, executive, single mom type. About Jae, we'll have to see how this all develops from here on. ;)

I'll try update as soon as possible dear. Thanks for the comment <3