I trust you darling, to bring me happy ending, but I was worried that there wouldn't be one right now - only later - and I am not sure I could handle that.
Love! Now, I'm gonna continue to read it :) And hey, I was right about that freaking cop :)
Read it now. God, woman, what a ride! Mrs. Carr was amazing, and she knew how to adress Jensen and how to reach him. And when the boys were reunited? I have no words. It was absolutely touching. I don't want to let them go, either. Never ever.
Poor Jeff. I'd almost like to write a whole fic about this jeff and his struggles to be the kind of man he wants to be.
Mrs. Carr...the woman puts up with no bullshit. And her love for her kids is absolute. It'll be interesting how she copes with her changed son in the longer term. I really do like writing her though. I figured somebody in Davis' family had to have some sense.
It is soooo fuckin' GREAT to see a fic of any kind that has Jensen's mom being supportive and strong-it's very unusual. Now if his dad's not an abusive religious freak, that'll be even better...
Yes, it's a tense, tough chapter-but we're big kids, we can handle it. *flexes muscles* It's more than worth it for the pay off at the end, the love and complete trust between Jared and Jensen. Jared's gonna fight for his man! *beams*
I love Donna and if she's gonna be mean in my fics she's gonna have a reason to be. And usually that comes down to the way her love for her kids is being expressed.
Truth to tell, Donna's part of the reason the model!verse became unwriteable. Because the mom was lacking that motherly love and I didn't want to write Donna that way and at the same time I didn't want to use yet another OC. But I guess I should.
OMG! So much awesome in this chapter. Poor Jeff, getting himself drunk in order to try and do the right thing. And Jared, hauled in for something he didn't do. And Jensen with so many people who care about him, all trying to help in different ways. I think I kinda like his mom.
This is by far the longest chapter in the fic. There was so much to do in all four POVs and I really didn't want to leave the chapter without the boys back together again.
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Love!
Now, I'm gonna continue to read it :) And hey, I was right about that freaking cop :)
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God, woman, what a ride! Mrs. Carr was amazing, and she knew how to adress Jensen and how to reach him. And when the boys were reunited? I have no words. It was absolutely touching. I don't want to let them go, either. Never ever.
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Poor Jeff. I'd almost like to write a whole fic about this jeff and his struggles to be the kind of man he wants to be.
Mrs. Carr...the woman puts up with no bullshit. And her love for her kids is absolute. It'll be interesting how she copes with her changed son in the longer term. I really do like writing her though. I figured somebody in Davis' family had to have some sense.
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Yes, it's a tense, tough chapter-but we're big kids, we can handle it. *flexes muscles* It's more than worth it for the pay off at the end, the love and complete trust between Jared and Jensen. Jared's gonna fight for his man! *beams*
And once again, oh Jeff...
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Truth to tell, Donna's part of the reason the model!verse became unwriteable. Because the mom was lacking that motherly love and I didn't want to write Donna that way and at the same time I didn't want to use yet another OC. But I guess I should.
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Donna's cool to write. :)
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*pets him carefully*
Oh, boys. At least Jensen's mom has a lick of sense.
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:)
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