Okay, so I read this all in one hit, and after the first chapter, my feedback was going be along the lines of "Hi, my brain has overloaded on the competency-kink and might be back sometime next week. It's left a message: eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!" because eeeeeeeeeeee! *coughs*
And then I read the second chapter, and I'm still competency-kinked to heaven and back, but the whole blowjob choking scene, oh my god oh my god. I don't think I breathed all paragraph. The moment when Karl consciously relaxes his hands and doesn't fight, oh my god. That was so very brilliantly disturbing.
And now the third chapter, and I... I'm not sure I can properly put this into words. poisontaster creates Kept!verse to explore sex slavery, and lo! the fans rejoiced. And now there's this: Something about the way his perception seems to be turned outward, surveying the room instead of only his master.... And suddenly we have the world of the body slaves, and the world of .... this, and it all fits together utterly seamless, and it's
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You totally made my day with this review. I was all "Did I lose everybody with the second chapter?" and "Is Matt no longer redeemable in the eyes of the reader?" So I'm so glad that it all worked so strongly for you.
I'd been playing with the idea of an assassin slave for a while, then I read a Bourne AU by Trishabooms that totally inspired me to write this pairing, and then all the pieces of it just fell together as I was lying awake that night. I think it's really liberating to write a slave with a different main purpose than just sex.
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*flails incoherently for a while*
Okay, so I read this all in one hit, and after the first chapter, my feedback was going be along the lines of "Hi, my brain has overloaded on the competency-kink and might be back sometime next week. It's left a message: eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!" because eeeeeeeeeeee! *coughs*
And then I read the second chapter, and I'm still competency-kinked to heaven and back, but the whole blowjob choking scene, oh my god oh my god. I don't think I breathed all paragraph. The moment when Karl consciously relaxes his hands and doesn't fight, oh my god. That was so very brilliantly disturbing.
And now the third chapter, and I... I'm not sure I can properly put this into words. poisontaster creates Kept!verse to explore sex slavery, and lo! the fans rejoiced. And now there's this: Something about the way his perception seems to be turned outward, surveying the room instead of only his master.... And suddenly we have the world of the body slaves, and the world of .... this, and it all fits together utterly seamless, and it's ( ... )
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I'd been playing with the idea of an assassin slave for a while, then I read a Bourne AU by Trishabooms that totally inspired me to write this pairing, and then all the pieces of it just fell together as I was lying awake that night. I think it's really liberating to write a slave with a different main purpose than just sex.
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