FIC: Re-cast (scar!verse), ch 13/? rated PG Jensen/Jared

[ladyjanelly]

Title: Re-cast (scar!verse) ch 13

Comments

[celestialseason]

WooHoo! A new chapter of scar!verse. I love this story :-)

I like the info we learn about Jensen and why his mom feels the way she does.
Oh and his mom mentioning of the scar - why won't Jensen get it fixed? I'm really curious about the scar's story. And poor Jared, trying to make sure nothing goes wrong and then getting slapped - ouch. But at least it might help Jensen and his mom. Great chapter. Thanks for sharing.

[ladyjanelly]

It felt great to get this out. Such a complex chapter, it kicked my ass.

I really wanted his parents to come across as good people who just don't understand. They really love their son.

Jared really tries to play peace-keeper. I think he was okay with getting caught in the crossfire if it made things better for Jensen.

And yes. Scar. Now Jared has more of a reason to actually talk about it.

[ladyjanelly]

I saw on your LJ that you're internet-impaired right now, so I take it as a compliment that you took the time to read and comment at all.

It was so hard to manage a scene with so many people in it. I'm really not so good at groups.

Jensen's parents really love their son, and I think they would have had an easier time forgiving him than they had forgiving themselves.

[elektrik_storm]

awww the boys!

cannot wait for more!

i love this verse!

[ladyjanelly]

yay! Glad you're enjoying it.

[elmathelas]

::happy sigh:: I really like the way you're weaving this all together.

[ladyjanelly]

This chapter was so hard. OMG.

But now Jared understands more about Jensen's family dynamic, and now he has a reason to ask about the scar.

[cal_j_fielding]

Another wonderful chapter...it makes my day to find this posted when I come home from work.

I think you handled the Jared's meetings and opinion of the Ackles very well...

so yeah, loved this as usual.

Looking forward to seeing where it goes next.

[ladyjanelly]

This was so hard, weaving a scene with four characters interacting. One of my weaknesses as a writer. I wanted a "No-villians" sort of environment. Jensens parents really love him. they really want him to be happy. they just think they screwed that up for him and it's harder to forgive themselves than it would be to forgive Jensen.

and now Jared has a reason to ask about the scar.

[cal_j_fielding]

well I think you managed it wonderfully...I really like how you have written Jensen's parents...

and now Jared has a reason to ask about the scar.
oooh,....now I am all intrigued about the scar again.