layhan: 我可以成为你的彼得潘

[lafeaux]

我可以成为你的彼得潘。 i can be your peter pan.
based on the chinese lyrics of exo's peter pan, which is actually quite sad (why is the beat happy?? ;;), and as such will have lines and references from peter pan, both the movie and the novel

Comments

[ext_2041950]

/sobs/ this is so beautiful I'm crying DO YOU SEE MY TEARS OH GOD WHY

[urutakulover]

omg i'm about to cry, i really am TT___TT i'm here at work with teary eyes omg T__T
this was absolutely beautiful and sad but happy at the end because they were together again T.T
idk what else to say...i ship layhan so hard and this was so well written it went straight to my heart i love it ;__;
oh god i have so many feels i want to cry a river ;____; the "don't die" and "your peter pan feels a little lonely leaving you" were just noooo whyyyy ;____; they have to be together forever irl too please ;___; <3

[babyinspiritic]

I'm literally crying..
This is so beautiful and just everything about this was amazing.
Every time I listen to Peter Pan now, I'm gonna think of this masterpiece.
Yixing's character is so perfect and Luhan.. just ugh beautiful ;;
You seriously just took my heart and broke it into a million pieces and then gathered all the pieces up and taped it back together.
Exquisite.
I loved this with all my heart. <3
Thank You for writing this.

[taffyn]

ugh ohgod i was totally expecting angst and was all ready but yet wHY DOES IT STILL HURT THIS MUCH ;;
the layhan character dynamics developed so preciously.. and your writing style is gorgeous, wow so much emotions. ...and you say you haven't written a fic in a long time eh well can i just say gull u are so brilliant.
i will go listen to peter pan again and appreciate the lyrics and drown in some feels.
thanks for sharing this beautiful piece~ <3

[tokidokiko]

So beautifully written. But *sighs* yet another sad LayHan stories. This pairing never seem to have a happy ending in fanfic world. Although, the ending was bittersweet, they did ended up together, even if it's in that sad yet romantic sorta way.

Honestly, I never looked up the translation of the Peter Pan lyrics until I read this story, how sad and totally not match the upbeat melody. Still a nice song though.

Thank you for sharing your lovely story ^____^