Awwww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it :) I haven't seen you around for some time... hope everything's good and the summer is being pleasant ♥! Lots of love! xx
"ONE TIME TOO MANY."karyngAugust 5 2009, 22:52:18 UTC
O. ‘Lago’ . . .
This is WONDERFULLY written (smile).
Love this line:
". . . Morgan was left in an unbelieving daze for one long moment, as he stood alone in a corner of the room, near a small puddle of blood smeared on the floor - a bloodied curtain crumpled by his side, and prime numbers still resounding in his head."
The first few words surmise EVERYTHING: HOPE that Reid would finally know how he feels; JOY that the time to stop hiding has finally come; SORROW that, yet again, someone had physically hurt Reid; and, BROKEN-HEARTEDNESS that of ‘all wants and desires’, the one most craved may be soon at an end. You have captured these anguished feelings quite well.
FANTASTIC (smile) ! ! !
Please ‘Lago’, may there be MORE of ‘ONE TIME’, very soon (wink).
Re: "ONE TIME TOO MANY."lagolindariAugust 11 2009, 08:54:40 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely detailed comment. It's really encouraging :)! Hopefully, the next chapter should be posted this week. I feel guilty for keeping you readers (and Morgan, of course) suspended from this cliffhanger for so long :)!
you know we are all angst-whores and love to see Reid in peril.
LOL, I know, I can't help myself :)! Look at my icon... I'm not even trying to deny it anymore :D
Hopefully, the next chapter should be up this week. Job has been a massive bitch, but finally on thursday I'll have a day off... I can't wait for it! It'll be writing day *___*!!
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Hopefully the next part shouldn't take too long... thank you for the encouragement :)!
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This part was wonderful...will be waiting anxiously for the next part. :)
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Poor Reid, hurting, and Morgan... angsting... ooooohhhhh. Did I said how much I'm loving it?! *grin*
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I haven't seen you around for some time... hope everything's good and the summer is being pleasant ♥!
Lots of love! xx
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O. ‘Lago’ . . .
This is WONDERFULLY written (smile).
Love this line:
". . . Morgan was left in an unbelieving daze
for one long moment, as he stood alone in a
corner of the room, near a small puddle of blood
smeared on the floor - a bloodied curtain
crumpled by his side, and prime numbers still
resounding in his head."
The first few words surmise EVERYTHING: HOPE
that Reid would finally know how he feels; JOY
that the time to stop hiding has finally come;
SORROW that, yet again, someone had physically
hurt Reid; and, BROKEN-HEARTEDNESS that of
‘all wants and desires’, the one most craved may
be soon at an end. You have captured these
anguished feelings quite well.
FANTASTIC (smile) ! ! !
Please ‘Lago’, may there be MORE of ‘ONE TIME’,
very soon (wink).
Always . . .
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Hopefully, the next chapter should be posted this week. I feel guilty for keeping you readers (and Morgan, of course) suspended from this cliffhanger for so long :)!
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This was beautifully written and friggin heart-breaking. Though I know (hope) that it will get much better with each passing chapter :)
I adored this sweetie, great idea. I like that you put Reid in a new situation because you know we are all angst-whores and love to see Reid in peril.
Can't wait for more honey, loved it!! :) As you probably already guessed, haha!
Love,
Emma xx
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LOL, I know, I can't help myself :)! Look at my icon... I'm not even trying to deny it anymore :D
Hopefully, the next chapter should be up this week. Job has been a massive bitch, but finally on thursday I'll have a day off... I can't wait for it! It'll be writing day *___*!!
Lots of love, darling ♥!
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