Comments | lagos61: Lonely Ladies chapter 2

lagos61

Lonely Ladies chapter 2

Mar 01, 2010 22:08

Miranda waited patiently in the closet until she was sure that Andrea had left the building. It wouldn't do for the girl to know that she'd been discovered in the midst of her treachery. The extra time allowed Miranda to focus instead on the more important issue of how she would handle the Daniel Brown plagiarism case: She went through the rest ( Read more... )

dwp, mirandy, femslash

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geekyboo24 March 2 2010, 10:20:22 UTC

I loved the interaction with the twins and of course -- "Ravitz. Stephen. Heather. Mauro. Klein. Roy. Piano. Emily." Great update. :)

yr comment lagos61 March 3 2010, 01:07:56 UTC

Thanks! I'm working on chptr 3 now.

perks123 March 2 2010, 11:55:04 UTC

Wonderful update. Light bulbs are going off every where... Andrea "gets it" about blue not being just blue; Nigel "gets it" about the designs. The last line is priceless. Thank you.

yr comment lagos61 March 3 2010, 01:08:33 UTC

Thank you--you too have a light bulb!

pure_ecstasy6 March 2 2010, 12:03:21 UTC

Thank you so much for writing this fic! I am very much enjoying it! So glad that Andy gets it now lol hopefully she won't be a bitch like she was in the first chapter! :p Hmm, deff looking forward to seeing how they get together. Can't wait for your next update =D

yr. comment lagos61 March 3 2010, 01:11:14 UTC

You're welcome! She wasn't a b/witch--she's just young and a bit whingey. Besides, we've had some complaints about angelic Andy, and I thought it would be nice to try and see if Andy is less nice than she looks. :P

Re: yr. comment pure_ecstasy6 March 3 2010, 02:49:19 UTC

True, bitch prob wasn't the right word. She's just a little whingey and not nice lol hopefully she's nicer in the next update but thanks for writing am enjoying this =D

les_reader March 2 2010, 14:47:42 UTC

Great Chapter... keep going.
Miranda is so trying to be in character, it's hard under Andrea's stare tho.
Everything is comming just perfect.

yr comment lagos61 March 3 2010, 01:11:59 UTC

Thanks. I'm working on it.

Very nice! bimshire March 2 2010, 15:27:10 UTC

I am thoroughly enjoying this! Your phone call description in Chapter One was to die for! I passed out laughing! And this chapter was excellent. You've managed to really give us an insight into Miranda's mind and what she feels. I'm really looking forward to reading more!

Re: Very nice! lagos61 March 3 2010, 01:12:21 UTC

Thank you!