How's my driving?

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Tch. You all act like you've never seen snow before.

[Mello's cold and bored, which means he's extra irritable.]

Is there an Alphonse Elric around still?

[There’s something of a pause before Mello begins to speak. Sounds of his boots making contact with the ground can be heard as he paces back and forth a little - it’s not quite stomping, but it’s close.]

Oh, very clever, Near. Well played.

[His voice is heavy with sarcasm, and underneath, kept tightly in check, a note of furious anger.]So you ( Read more... )

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