The Deep End 3/4

May 31, 2007 13:56

This chapter is rated PG-13. Thanks to everyone for reading so far!

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joyfulfeather May 31 2007, 18:12:51 UTC
*melty squeeee*

Have I mentioned lately how much I love this series? Really really really a lot.

Ronon and Teyla are adorable -- the pogostick still cracks me up, and the way they're so private about their relationship but Elizabeth finally catches them, that's sweet!

And John and Elizabeth are just beyond sweet. I love how in love they are, and how they're real people with real relationship fears and everything turns out okay and awww!

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astrum_presul May 31 2007, 19:19:46 UTC
*grin* YAY! I'm very glad that my Pool!fic Muse still likes it. hehe

Teyla and Ronon just strike me as being far more private than the other two, in any reality, you know?

I love how at the beginning of writing this series, it was all, 'Elizabeth wants to jump him,' and now it's all 'Elizabeth's totally head over heels for him,' those crazy characters!

THANK YOOU, my Human Collaborator Flunkie Pool!fic Muse!

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joyfulfeather May 31 2007, 19:45:03 UTC
Heeeee. :D I'd be a pretty poor pool!fic muse if I didn't like it!

Teyla and Ronon just strike me as being far more private than the other two, in any reality, you know?

*snicker* For some reason, that gave me the mental image of John jumping Elizabeth in the control room. Hm. (... not that that's exactly what I should write for CCP4... unless it is.) But yes. Even in the actual show!verse, I could see John and Elizabeth being very public with their relationship while Ronon and Teyla are married before anyone realizes that they're more than friends.

I love how at the beginning of writing this series, it was all, 'Elizabeth wants to jump him,' and now it's all 'Elizabeth's totally head over heels for him,' those crazy characters!

It's a good progression! :D

*tackle* You're welcome! Thank you for writing such great fic!

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astrum_presul May 31 2007, 20:26:19 UTC
Hehe, well, yes, but just being inspirational doesn't mean ya gotta like what you're inspiring!

Oooh! I do enjoy that thought! *evil grin*

Hehe indeed. Teyla and Ronon would probably do subtle much better than those two.

:-D

Heee *tackle*

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roothekittykat May 31 2007, 18:17:28 UTC
HEEEEE! yey :D

you're making it very hard for me to pretend to be working when what I really want to do is squee! LOL :)

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astrum_presul May 31 2007, 19:20:31 UTC
Haha, I'm sorry!

Actually, I'm really not, but I hope my attempt has given you the impression that I am!

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roothekittykat May 31 2007, 19:25:08 UTC
LoL :)

pogo stick...heeee :D

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astrum_presul May 31 2007, 20:23:13 UTC
Heh, I don't even remember why I wrote that, really.

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ankareeda May 31 2007, 19:25:52 UTC
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

Adorable like woah, I just squeed my head off. So cute, sweet and just awwwww. I love how you portray their relationship. ♥

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astrum_presul May 31 2007, 20:22:36 UTC
Hee! Yay! I"m so glad it made you squee. That's what I was going for!

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vickysg1 May 31 2007, 20:24:19 UTC
heeeeeeeeeeee!!!

Yep, trust John to give her that book! But the rest of his present is so great! Both the flying lessons and moving in with her!

I do hope that they'll be reunited in next chapter!

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astrum_presul May 31 2007, 20:43:20 UTC
*grin* There is indeed more to come!

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