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[larouxe]

so, i'm sorry all my entries as of late have been a bunch of poetry, but that's all that's been pouring out of me lately, so that's what you get, and that's how you know what's going on with me. I hope it's not too annoying. But for anyone who has actually been reading the poetry, I need some advice. I am going to be reading some of my poetry at

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[potato409]

I really like the one that starts with:

We laugh, we run, we FLY
one man
in front
2 rows in
throws back his head
opens his mouth
and splits his sides

just because it really captures the feeling for me, like I understand. I don't know if it's right for the smokey bar setting because I've never really spent much time in smokey bars, but you know whatever you think.

[afirthionado]

I like "When's it my turn?" but that could just be me.

uhh, no

[larouxe]

I am NOT reading that one