Debriefing part 2

[larsfarm77]

Title: Debriefing
Rating: T (for now)
Pairing: Laura/Bill
Summary: It's the middle of the night, and Laura is at the end of her rope. She finds Bill asleep on the couch. Takes place between 4x08 and 4x09 (so spoilers up to this point)
Words: 2322 in part 2.

Huge thanks to tjonsey and innealta for encouragement and amazing beta work. Love you guys

Comments

[chrissykat80]

OMG I love it! Totally makes my day since it's almost noon and freaking dark outside still.
They're so adorable! The flirting/ogling makes me squirm in my seat cuz I know what's coming!?!?!

[larsfarm77]

Awww, thanks. I love that I made your day a little brighter. Your review certainly made mine that way as well. You know what's coming??? If you're thinking what I'm thinking, then you're right :D

[karuri]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

<3 loved.

and c'mon Han Solo's line was SEXY. Bill steals from the best!

[larsfarm77]

Hee, thank you!! This review had me grinning.

As for Han Solo -- the line "I know." was totally SEXY and worked beautifully for him. No matter that he was a Viper jock, Bill is no Han Solo. Though you're right, he is stealing from the best!

[samcasey]

OK I TOTALLY AGREE WITH ufp13 YOU CANNOT JUST STOP THERE I CANT WAIT FOR PART THREE! but any way i really liked part two i thought it was really sweet and i liked how they talked about things... im looking foward to seeing what happens when she takes off her robe... oh and btw permission to ogle ADOREABLE

[larsfarm77]

Does it help if I say you'll get your Christmas icon wish tomorrow?? At least in fic form :).

I really wanted to put a lot of those issues that they've had on the table. Credit for permission to ogle goes to my friend TJonesy :)

Thanks so much for your continued comments!

[larsfarm77]

Thanks!! So glad you enjoyed. I couldn't reconcile "about time" without Bill having said "I love you" first.

Sorry about ending it here -- your icon Christmas wish will come true soon enough (at least in fic form) :D

Thanks so much for your continued comments!

[pandj1958]

Another great chapter.
I am inclined to agree with you that Bill had already said his i love you's before the hub and thats why he came out with 'about time' I really hope we get some flash backs in 4.5 of the time that he said it (fingers crossed)
Can't wait for chapter three. (stares at clock impatiently)

[larsfarm77]

Oooh, flashbacks would be wonderful, though I'm not sure how I'd feel if they showed something like their frakking some time in the past (like NC). Hee, I guess I'd be happy, but something tells me they haven't gone there yet.

Chapter three tomorrow -- thanks so much for your comments!