Fanfic: Fall (Adama/Roslin 1/1)

[larsfarm77]

Title: Fall
Author: larsfarm77
Rating: T
Word count: 175
Summary: A collection of images, starting at the end
A/N: Written for the prompt "red" for MoL VII, day 25.

Many, many thanks to somadanne for the amazing beta work -- you rock, my friend!

Comments

[newnumbertwo]

*sobs*

So very beautiful. The description of them post-mutiny is particularly stunning: the way they share power.

♥ ♥ ♥

[larsfarm77]

Awww *hands tissues*

Thanks!! I actually added that bit yesterday as I felt that it didn't transition well enough -- so happy you enjoyed!

Fifty shades of red

[altitudeandwine]

That was your first photoshop attempt?!
Very powerful image.

I loved your beautiful language (as I invariably do), with its memorable sentenses. "Cold air on the hillside seemed to blow through his skin as if it were paper."
Poor Bill, sustained only by the memory of her.
No wonder red is on his mind.

Re: Fifty shades of red

[larsfarm77]

Hee, yes, Laura is extra transparent so that you can't tell how badly I cut her out :D. Photoshop intimidates me, but I watched some tutorials and it worked! I'm happy you thought the image was cool!

Poor Bill, sustained only by the memory of her.

Losing a soulmate, would colour ever be as vivid again?

Thanks so much on the language. somadanne does a lot to make sure that reads smoothly.

[k_d_456_345_a]

This is gorgeous. Thanks for posting it. I like how you believably discern between what they would share and what they would leave unspoken, unacknowledged.

[larsfarm77]

Thanks so much! I could see them coming to an agreement around NC -- Laura not wanting to relive it and Bill able to live with pretending it wasn't there.

[aka_plynn]

He really didn't last long after Laura died, did he? It breaks my heart that he hadn't slept in the cabin, instead sleeping on the cold dirt. He's just waiting. (And most certainly not chasing off after some native woman, Eddie.)

[larsfarm77]

And most certainly not chasing off after some native woman, Eddie.

SO SAY WE ALL!!

((((plynn)))

[fragrantwoods]

Oh, gods, yes, this!!!

[fragrantwoods]

The colors here just kill me. The yellow on her ribs really brought the tears, so subtle, so unmistakable, and of course it would lead to tha silent conversation. So much here, and it all hurts so good.

[larsfarm77]

Thank you so much for this. It was hard to try to be subtle with 'red', so I'm so happy it worked for you. I hope family and thanksgiving turkey have made all the tears forgotten!