Fanfic: Dirty Hands

Mar 13, 2008 16:23

Again, apologies flist.

The second of two fics written for LJ Secret Santa 2007.

Title: Dirty Hands
Author: larsfarm77
Rating: MA
Words: 4901
Warnings: Sex. Lots of it.

Huge thanks to ellisandra, tjonesy, innealta and dorque_wrench for ideas and beta help. You guys rock!

Dirty Hands )

roslin, fanfic, adama

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lambrosia June 27 2012, 15:59:33 UTC
Loved your story! I really enjoy your writing and have read many of your other stories and I thought it was about time to send some appreciation your way. Serious apologies for not having done so before. Your writing is really good and I like it how you manage to slip in some deeper meanings into the story.
Getting Laura to work on the Daru Mozu was brilliant! It's defo something she might've done. The ending to the A/R story was really sweet and heartwarming and I absolutely loved that you didn't end it there. Zarek's pov was very enlightening and the last sentences were so profound! goose bumps!
oh.. and I LOVED your icon of Bill 'dips on the prez': hilarious!

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larsfarm77 June 27 2012, 19:25:40 UTC
Hey! THanks so much, and no worries at all. A comment like this is like a really awesome Christmas present that you didn't know was sent to you!

One of my favourite things is to look at the A/R relationship through the eyes of other characters, so I'm happy you felt Zarek was a good way to end.

Thanks again for taking the time to do this -- it's very appreciated!

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lady_classa November 24 2012, 21:45:03 UTC
I haven't commented on this before?!?!?! huh?!?! It's the third time I've read it now!!!

This fic really got stuck in my mind, I keep going back to it over and over again in my mind, it's just so erotic and emotional and in-character, I love it so much! One of my absolute favorite fics. And I've read a lot.....

This:
“Does it still hurt?”
She felt his breath against her skin.

“A little, actually,” she said truthfully.
A line of warm, wet kisses dropped onto her skin just above the bandage.
She did tremble then, and the moan that slipped past her lips was low and wanton.
“Better?” he asked, his lips still on her skin. His fingers ran lightly over the outside of her legs. His rough skin caught randomly against the heavy fabric of her jeans.

Should win an award. Seriously, so original and sexy, ugh!!!!!!!!! One of the best smut bits in a fic EVER. EVER.

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larsfarm77 November 25 2012, 01:38:14 UTC
Hey!! Thanks so very much for this. It's lovely to hear that the story holds up over multiple readings -- so cool that it's one of your favourites!

The idea for the part you quoted came from a good friend. It was a pleasure to write; I got completely distracted by it :D :D.

Thank you again, you've made my day!

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