Fanfic: Surrender, Part 1

[larsfarm77]

A post Six of One fic; couldn't resist.

Title: Surrender
Author: larsfarm77
Rating: T (for the first two parts)
Words: 1606 in part 1

Huge thanks to my betas tjonesy, innealta, and ellisandra for amazing work.

Comments

[somadanne]

Oh, I love this! I felt like I was right there watching them.

[larsfarm77]

Thanks, (((Anne))), that's such a wonderful compliment for a fanfic writer. I'm grinning over here :D.

[lelianamckay]

AWESOME!! I love that you got Saul to talk about Ellen, very sweet. And him pushing Bill to talk to Laura...eeeeee!
Very nice plot! I can't wait for chap 2!

[larsfarm77]

Thank you so much! I wanted to see more of the Saul who's Bill's friend, and I felt he is one character that truly understands what Bill is going through because of Ellen.

More tomorrow :D

[37_soul_sister]

I love that. That would be an amazing scene. I wish it was real. It felt so real, just reading it. well done. I can't wait for more.

[larsfarm77]

Hee, me too (wishing it was real). I miss Saul, the man. That's the best compliment that a writer like me can get ... that it felt real. Thanks so much for commenting!

[flamingo55]

Hey, you wrote me fic for Mother's Day! Thanks! :)

“So,” Saul said, pouring a salutary amount of ambrosia in Bill’s glass, “… you frakking her yet?”

“Frak you.” Saul lifted the bottle. “Refill?”

I love this, I love this, I love this. Not just the lines, the whole thing. It's so perfectly Bill and Saul, old friends who aren't afraid to be completely honest. (Well, except about the whole Cylon thing...). Can't wait for the next parts. And the sequel, which I will demand now. :)

[larsfarm77]

Aww, frak, and I'm late with it, lol. *wonders if flamingo is working on lars' birthday fic ... july, july, july*

Glad you felt it was true to the characters, makes me very happy!

LOL, about the sequel.

[egeria61]

I love this!!!! Especially Saul's character, and Bill's reactions to him. I can totally envision Saul not forgetting anything that happened on the witness stand. Being forced to talk about Ellen . . . . Wow, you've reminded me how huge that was. And I love the advice that Saul gives to Bill, and hope that since he's an old friend, Bill will eventually listen to Saul.

I can't wait for the next parts. The Bill/Saul relationship deserves the attention you're giving it, and I bet this fic will be in interesting conversation with S4 canon.

Thanks for the oxygen. :D

[larsfarm77]

Hee, oxygen. I had a blast writing from Saul's POV (I think his voice is still in my head somewhere, lol) and the Bill/Saul relationship has been absent this season (I miss it!). I think that Saul can really identify with what Bill is going through because of Ellen and he's one man who can say anything he wants to his friend.

Thanks so much for the review -- very appreciated!!

More tomorrow.

[egeria61]

More tomorrow? SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Yes, please continue this, because I love it, and the rest of your fics, which I read on SI before becoming a member. (So I couldn't comment on them. But I loved them.) :D