Fanfic: Surrender, Part 1

[larsfarm77]

A post Six of One fic; couldn't resist.

Title: Surrender
Author: larsfarm77
Rating: T (for the first two parts)
Words: 1606 in part 1

Huge thanks to my betas tjonesy, innealta, and ellisandra for amazing work.

Comments

[hummingfly67]

(I am still catching up on your fics)

You have Saul down so well here. He was a difficult character for me to like, though his rigidness in the beginning of the shows was intriguing.

Couple parts that resounded with me (well the whole fic did, but you know what I mean):

Before music had shifted the deck under his feet, before the line between friend and foe had become so maddeningly blurred.

Patience was a small thing to offer the man who had pulled him out of far too many dark places. It unnerved him to think that he could have stayed in that last one on New Caprica, if it meant that he could still have Ellen, still have the illusion of his humanity.

On to part 2...

[larsfarm77]

I love that you're working your way though the stories :).

It took me some time to *get* Saul; I love that he has all these faults, but he is unwaveringly loyal to Bill, no matter what (and that makes me like him). I actually really enjoy to write for him as he doesn't have a filter.

So glad you enjoyed -- thanks for these comments, loved them!