Fanfic: Surrender, Part 2

[larsfarm77]

Title: Surrender
Author: larsfarm77
Rating: T (for the first two parts)
Words: 560 in part 2

Huge thanks to my betas tjonesy, innealta, and ellisandra for amazing work.

Comments

[splodge04]

Woo I really can't wait for the next part. it was awesome. Well done :D YEY!

[larsfarm77]

Thanks so much! Last part tomorrow :D

[stiletto_freek]

YEAH..CLIFFHANGER. JUST LEAVE ME HERE.

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE NEXT PART.

;)

[larsfarm77]

Ahhhhhh ... I've been capslocked!

At least you don't have to wait long, right??

[lullabymoon]

Awesome! I love both parts you've posted so far, they are both brilliantly written and you really make it feel like I'm in the room with them. Loves. :D

Also, I'm friending, I sooo can't wait for the next part. I am of age and I'm (relatively) sane. LOL.

[larsfarm77]

Thanks so much - I love that you feel that you're in the same room with them; that's an amazing compliment!

Friended back. The relatively sane works well here too, lol.

[somadanne]

I'm looking forward to the rest of this! I love the paragraph with Laura's scent. Very nice.

[larsfarm77]

Thanks (((Anne)))! That's my favourite part of this little bit as well. The rest is ... the rest is coming tomorrow :D

[lelianamckay]

Oh! This is so good! Another great chapter.
It was a very nice touch to have Bill find the words he needed in a book, very in character. I can't wait for tomorrow!

[larsfarm77]

Thank you! The story is a spackle with canon ... though, of course, being me, I take things a bit far, lol.