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[Fanfiction] - Shuuhei Hisagi/Izuru Kira - Blue Skies

Apr 02, 2010 12:23

I'm drabbling again...

Title: Blue Skies
Fandom: Bleach
Rating: T
Pairing: Shuuhei Hisagi/Izuru Kira
Wordcount: 234
Warnings: Vaguely implied spoilers for the SS arc.
Disclaimer: Oh, if they were only mine...
Notes: Written for the queersouls100 prompt 001 'Blue'

Summary: The road to hell...

( Shuuhei is aware that he is being used. )

fanfiction: bleach

Comments 11

gypsygrrl420 April 2 2010, 11:36:22 UTC

My god! This was perfect. Short, bittersweet, and an utter treat to read right before class. Seriously, you conveyed so much in such a lovely little handful of words...*g* I look forward to reading more of your work.

ms_legerdemain April 3 2010, 00:24:11 UTC

Thankyou! ♥ *blushes at the compliments* I'm glad you liked it, I always find drabbles a challenge.

Tehe, there'll probably be quite a bit coming - I'm on mid-semester break and I'm procrastinating something chronic. :p

gypsygrrl420 April 3 2010, 01:15:26 UTC

My one-sentences tend to run over 300 words...so a drabble? Yeah--impossible for me, lol. (Something about needing to tell an entire story in one sentence. *shrugs* Blame it on the Creative Writer in me, I suppose.)

Oooh...nice. Mine was two weeks ago. *sighs* Four more weeks left...

ms_legerdemain April 4 2010, 02:42:55 UTC

Oh, I feel that. I have this problem with excessive use of commas. Sentences just turn into paragraphs without me noticing. I'm better than I was, but it's still a problem.

Yeah, it's good to have a holiday. Unfortunately, holiday is here synonymous with doing-all-the-work-I-didn't-do-during-the-term-because-I'm-lazy. :p But why would I do uni work/think about RL when I could write fic?

Also...that dp...is very, very dsitracting.

nnoi April 2 2010, 14:37:45 UTC

Wow beautiful

ms_legerdemain April 3 2010, 00:24:57 UTC

Thankyou! Glad you think so. :)

kitchensink13 April 3 2010, 02:27:26 UTC

I really love this. The atmosphere is excellent.

ms_legerdemain April 4 2010, 02:43:12 UTC

Thanyou! I'm glad you liked it. :)

xglimpsex May 13 2010, 14:16:31 UTC

HOW DID I MISS THIS?!?!

It's no secret that this pairing is really... really not my favorite, but this is so wonderfully written. Short, but it packs a punch, especially in that last sentence. Shit. My heart just ached for a momoent.

ms_legerdemain May 16 2010, 09:05:03 UTC

*blushes* Thankyou. ♥

I have a weird relationship with this pairing; I don't actually really ship them together, because I see their potential relationship as so destructive, but at the same time I find myself writing them. Perhaps because they're so destructive. So I don't really like them together, but I put them together because I find it interesting. And because I'm a sadist who enjoys character torture.

Still, I'm glad it had an impact, even if you don't like the pairing.

jazz_trousers November 3 2010, 00:47:23 UTC

Fuck me sideways, this paring's such a guilty pleasure of mine.
Brilliantly written, love how you paint the picture and portray Shuhei's intentions.