Comments | laughingduchess: DW fic, Occam's Razor- Part 1

laughingduchess

DW fic, Occam's Razor- Part 1

Feb 05, 2008 01:12

Comments 25

roquentine February 6 2008, 01:52:27 UTC

Er, there's a part two, right?... Right?...

*glee* So glad to see your writing again! I'm usually not one for reunion fic (or reunion-might-be-forthcoming fic) but this one is definitely an exception. Year Three = beautiful. Can't wait to see more!

laughingduchess February 13 2008, 00:49:58 UTC

Srsly, there's, like, a part one million.

It's long and needs editing, I think. But I'm glad this worked for you. I think I need to cut some stuff out as it seems a bit wordy to me, but I'm glad that year 3 stood out. I had a bit of a time with getting it exactly how I wanted it and worried that people would reject that section.

If you have any suggestions/opinions and the time to express them, I'd be very interested in hearing about anything that you thought didn't work.

I wasn't going to post another bit yet, because I didn't think anyone had read it, but I'll put a bit more up for you later tonight or tomorrow.

Thank you for commenting!

darksylvia February 13 2008, 00:00:16 UTC

Oh, good! I'm glad you're posting it! I really enjoyed reading/betaing it.

laughingduchess February 13 2008, 00:51:24 UTC

I'll soon have more to send you, actually. The ending and I are having a war and I am not currently winning it.

:(

Thanks for dropping a line!

darksylvia February 13 2008, 00:54:23 UTC

Ha, okay! I look forward to it.

sagacious_c February 14 2008, 20:12:37 UTC

This is beautiful. I love the simplicity of Year One. And there are a lot of great ideas in here: Rose and a Slitheen being united in wishing the Doctor was there, Rose falling in love with someone else for a while, building a time machine with Torchwood and it's not as cool... Can't wait to see where else you're going to go with this.

laughingduchess February 14 2008, 21:05:07 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for taking the time to comment and the next part will be up soon!

sherarara February 14 2008, 20:26:44 UTC

This is really great. I love the format, the pacing, the language - well, pretty much everything. I can't wait for the next update! You've got me hooked!

laughingduchess February 14 2008, 21:07:19 UTC

Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying it. I'll have the next section up soon.

rosa_acicularis February 14 2008, 20:32:45 UTC

Oh my. Oh my, oh my, oh my. This is brilliant.

Can't wait to read more.

laughingduchess February 14 2008, 21:07:51 UTC

Thank you so much! I'll have the next section up soon.