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shibatsu_mage in lavandereyes

Lavender, Ch. 1

Jul 06, 2007 08:11

Chapter 1
Surano: Life and Death

Things were dancing before my eyes that were strange and ridiculous, but I knew them.

I remember dreaming of triangles, bird wings, blues and oranges and grays. Each image pressed against my brain, then faded, leaving an outline against the outlines of those before it. Names rose on a tongue I couldn't yet feel. I ( Read more... )

Comments 3

lvlysnidrus July 6 2007, 12:57:49 UTC

ooooooh. me like.

...less than constructive, but...

shibatsu_mage July 6 2007, 13:00:20 UTC

hey, I totally forgot you were in this comm! XD Not being constructive is okay. It's mainly a teaser chapter, I just linked it from my site.

lvlysnidrus July 6 2007, 13:02:28 UTC

Ahahaha, yes I am! I saw like one comma error, where they said (I think) "Surano get out of here!" But otherwise there's not much to be constructive about.