Twisted Hearts

May 01, 2010 06:08

Title: Twisted Hearts
Rating: R
Genre: au!au
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack belong to Annie Proulx. No disrespect intended.
Summary: Under cut

Chapter 7 )

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lavender_snow May 5 2010, 23:30:36 UTC
You're right, Loreen. There is no problem in this world that love can't solve. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Lavender

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roby100 May 1 2010, 13:21:54 UTC
OMG! Another early chapter, I love you!
My heart is melting.

**it was better than any drug either one of us had ever tried**
I am so happy that Ennis has found out this, he deserves to be loved for the first time in his life. He didn't give up on Jack and Jack is surrending too. Unfortunately Jack is the adult here and the one who risks most if they get caught. I hope Ennis remembers that he left Amy's session to go to the bathroom and he goes back, even if it's not what I want!

Thanks so much for this precious surprise.

A big hug
Roby

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lavender_snow May 5 2010, 23:31:49 UTC
I guess it's easy to feel bad for both of these poor, lost souls. Thank you so much for your sweet words, Roby.
Lavender

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hampshirerose May 1 2010, 20:40:31 UTC
"My Jack"....sigh...just love the way Ennis thinks of Jack and hope before the end of this we get a "my Ennis" from Jack...fingers crossed!

I am torn by this update - I loved it and the fact that they are so close and are starting to admit/feel they need each other BUT what will happen if they are caught?! Major angst ahead if that happens!!

I am feeling very anxious about the whole situation.

Hugs Rose x

PS Forgot to say - am loving the frequent updates!!

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lavender_snow May 5 2010, 23:33:34 UTC
Hello, Rose, yeah, the situation could get very sticky...let's just hope they are able to keep things under wraps...Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Lavender

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eandj May 1 2010, 20:51:11 UTC
oh no Jack- what happened to you?
I hope these two have time to help each other heal and get better
Paula

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lavender_snow May 5 2010, 23:34:58 UTC
Hey Paula, I guess it's hard not to feel bad for both of these poor guys. Thank you so much for commenting and reading.
Lavender

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fl1789 May 1 2010, 22:47:53 UTC
Aww, their first real kiss! I know problems are not behind them yet but right now they are sharing such a beautiful moment together! Thank you for this new chapter :)

fl.

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lavender_snow May 5 2010, 23:36:11 UTC
Aw, thank you FL. I had a feeling you might like this chapter :) The first kiss is always the most memorable. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
Lavender

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