Twisted Hearts

Jul 14, 2010 17:26

Title: Twisted Hearts
Rating: R
Genre: au!au
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack belong to Annie Proulx. No disrespect intended.
Summary: Under cut

Chapter 15 )

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torry28 July 14 2010, 22:13:50 UTC
This is a wonderful chapter, heartbreaking in the beginning with Ennis being so lost and hurting, missing Jack like part of his soul was gone.All he needed was to see Jack to make him believe in himself, in Jack. There shirt exchange was sweet. How often has a simple used cloth brought comfort to someone holding it close to their heart?
Ennis has the heart of a lion when it comes to Jack and I truly believe he will do anything to stay clean, for Jack, for each other.I'm glad the doctor initiated for Jack to see Ennis. He was able to see Ennis was retreating back into himself. Jack and Ennis needed to see and reassure each other. A small gesture to some, to Ennis and Jack, a life line.
I love this story, thank you for this.
Love,
Torry

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lavender_snow July 26 2010, 10:46:33 UTC
Hey Torry, I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter :)Things are definitely looking up. Thank you for your heartfelt comment.
Lavender

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tui77 July 14 2010, 23:05:24 UTC
So good to see that Jack is back in Ennis's life. Ennis does so badly without him.

I look forward to more.

Cheers

Tui

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lavender_snow July 26 2010, 10:47:31 UTC
Hey Tui,
Yeah, little Ennis does not do well without his Jack, that's for sure. Things are looking up now, though. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, friend.
Lavender

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ifyoucantfixit2 July 15 2010, 00:01:30 UTC
I so sincerely love this story. IT IS SO REAL. I felt so bad for them when Ennis waa just a fetal position and crying for Jack. He was on the edge of giving up to the whole thing. It seemed like he may have just killed himself. It was nearly as bad for Jack. I think that the fact that Jack had been at it a lot longer gave him reason to believe he could make it. I am so glad that the Dr. allowed them to reconnect. It probably saved them. Thank you for this lovely chapter. Janice

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lavender_snow July 26 2010, 10:48:22 UTC
Aw, thanks so very much Janice. Your comments mean a lot to me and I'm so glad you are enjoying this story.
Lavender

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cosmok44 July 15 2010, 00:04:42 UTC
Missed this story it has been a couple of weeks. Poor Ennis - knew this would be tough for him, but glad Dr. L allowed them to see each other. Humm wonder what the doc is up too? But I guess he has ennis recovery in mind and knew he was struggling. Maybe the Doc will see what they do for each other too when together. Thanks. Gail

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lavender_snow July 26 2010, 10:49:32 UTC
Hello Gail,
Yeah, it was to be expected that Ennis would be a total mess, but things may finally be looking up for the two of them. Thank you so very much for you comments :)
Lavender

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lavender_snow July 26 2010, 11:06:43 UTC
Hey Honey,
Hope you're having fun in Alaska:)Stay away from those glaciers...you know what I'm talking about...Lol. Thanks for your comment, baby.
Lavender

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