Twisted Hearts

[lavender_snow]

Title: Twisted Hearts
Rating: R
Genre: au!au
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack belong to Annie Proulx. No disrespect intended.
Summary: Under cut

Comments

Twisted Hearts #15

[ennis4me]

Fabulous chapter - With just one look, Jack can make Ennis feel the love that he so rightly deserves - to be loved after a lifetime of neglect.

And Jack is showing his intelligence here - I'm glad that he is thinking long term.

And kudos to the Doc for allowing the boys to see each other.

Great story! Adrianne

Re: Twisted Hearts #15

[lavender_snow]

Aw, Adrianne, your comment made me smile :) Thank you so very much. I'm so glad you're still hanging with this story.
Lavender

Twisted hearts

[argentine65]

I just caught up and reading a lot of chapters and I liked very much how Ennis, with his 18 years, could manage to support Jack and avoid his coming to drugs again. I know it is hard for them to be apart but I guess it was the good thing to do and now they are going to be in the same facility again but I bet Doc will be having his sight over them. Thank you for sharing. Martha

Re: Twisted hearts

[lavender_snow]

Welcome back, Martha :) You have been missed. I'm thrilled you're still hanging with this story and have been able to catch up. Many thanks for your touching comments.
Lavender

[abraccio]

Ennis, it IS possible to have a full, rich and meaning-filled life.

Thanks,

Juliette

[freetraveller15]

Whenever Jack held me in moments like this, I would see all kinds of colors behind my eyelids; blues, greens, reds, and yellows, all blended together like the sky on the Fourth of July.

Oh my... This story is so rich of these amazing images Ennis seems to come up at different times, and that reveal he truly has the soul of a poet.

He's such a sensitive, vulnerable soul it almost hurts. But he's getting stronger and more motivated now. As the last part of this chapter eloquently showed...

Thank you
P

An emotional but sweet chapter

[zhouhua00]

Well, the first half of chapter is really sad, with Ennis being so down and broken, but then again, this is what I expect that he had to go through. The second half is a lot better. I can't say enough times - boys, please, please cherish your second chance. I really appreciate what the good Doc did for them, and I hope they will appreciate (looks like Jack does) just the same.

The shirt swap is really sweet, reminding me of the intertwined shirts in the OS/movie. And I won't be surprised if our boys wear them to sleep every night.