Twisted Hearts

Jul 14, 2010 17:26

Title: Twisted Hearts
Rating: R
Genre: au!au
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack belong to Annie Proulx. No disrespect intended.
Summary: Under cut

Chapter 15 )

au!au, lavender_snow, twisted hearts

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hampshirerose July 15 2010, 20:23:37 UTC
LS!!!

This was so good!

Poor Ennis. You wrote his loneliness and emptiness so well I could hardly stand it. I didn't expect Jack to come and see him but when I read it again it was so right. Dr L really cares for them doesn't he? Wants what's best for both provided they do what's best for them - stay clean.

They will do it for sure with you writing it!

Rose x

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lavender_snow July 26 2010, 11:12:40 UTC
Hey Rose,
Yeah, Doc does have a soft spot for these two guys. Writing Ennis in such a dark place was NOT any easier for me to write as it was for you read-believe me, but I felt that that's how Ennis would have reacted. Things are looking up and yeah, I'm a happy ending girl :)
Thanks Rose!

Lavender

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annabuffy July 16 2010, 00:49:31 UTC
I'm so glad that Dr. Lambertus let Jack spend time with Ennis and that he realizes that the boys are helping each other have real feelings for each other. Feel bad that Ennis is doing so badly, but hopefully seeing Jack and Jack telling him that they have a better chance of being and working together will give Ennis the push he needs to do better in helping himself.

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lavender_snow July 26 2010, 11:13:49 UTC
Hello Anna,
Yeah, I think even Dr. Lambertus realizes how much these two really do need each other. Things are finally starting to look up :) Thanks so much for you lovely comment.
Lavender

ps I love your avatar.

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peace joetheone July 17 2010, 05:23:24 UTC
to know that each of them is hurting so much and to know that they are together for a few days. Jack is correct Ennis needs to pull himself together and get it together. Joe

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Re: peace lavender_snow July 26 2010, 11:14:45 UTC
Hey Joe,
Yup, no doubt, Ennis has got to get his life together or he will never thrive. He's tryin though, I swear! Thanks so much for your lovely comment, friend.
Lavender

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ramona4jake July 18 2010, 22:58:38 UTC
Thank god Dr. Lambertus understood that it's not that wise to keep these two apart ! I hate to see them hurting, but now maybe they will do things right !
Thank you, cannot wait for more !

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lavender_snow July 26 2010, 11:15:57 UTC
Hey Ramona,
These guys really do need each other. A little too dependent on one another? Maybe, but it works...in so twisted way. Thank you so, so much for your comments!
Lavender

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luvenck July 22 2010, 01:20:25 UTC
OMG!!!!! I got behind in LJ due to RL.....sometimes everything sucks.....

But not your chapter...Oooohhhh...It was so HEART-WRENCHING to read. I can't imagine how difficult it must have been to write. But it ended on a promising note........

BUT, again I have to say it was just beautiful, and my chest hurts a little due to being slightly choked up.

Keep up the excellent work, and I hope I catch the next one at the time it is written.

(((((Many Hugs))))
XOXO
CAT

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lavender_snow July 26 2010, 11:16:50 UTC
Hey Cat!
I hope RL is getting better for you. I'm glad you were able to catch up and I thank you so very much for your lovely comment, friend.
Lavender

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