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lazy_boo

The Scent of Desire

Dec 30, 2010 21:28

This is the first in a five part series posed as a challenge by Vangoghgurrl - one story for each of the senses.

[Against the stacks in a used book store. Featured sense: smell]

Disclaimer: I do not own Skins nor do I know what it smells like. And that's probably a good thing.

The Scent of Desire

They'd stepped into the store hours ago, to escape the ( Read more... )

pwp, five senses challenge, naomily

Comments 4

Mmmmm vangogh_gurrl December 30 2010, 15:35:36 UTC

That was so good. I want to go stick my nose in a book and breathe deeply... And then....

You did an excellent job using the sense of smell. The vampire books was a nice touch :) Made it your own with the mythology books, yeah? I'm really impressed with the first installment!! Of course, this is my favorite... Bring on sound. That is going to be one fucking amazing PWP.

Thank you for accepting the challenge. ;)

I want Emily Fitch, damn it.

thadarkslayer December 30 2010, 15:58:23 UTC

Have I mentioned lately how wonderful you are? Yes? Well, I'll say it again. YOU'RE WONDERFUL. I should probably also mention that I totally read this under a dryer at the salon. You're out and about in the world. ;)

This one was incredibly vivid, and very much a full on sense awakening via words, I'm looking forward to the others.

warriormari December 30 2010, 18:46:51 UTC

I got a very early message with the link to this story, which woke me up and prompted me to read it and go back to sleep, and now that I am properly awake, read it again... and again!

This was incredible, from the descriptions of the bookstore to the actual smells. Very hot and beautiful. I can't wait for the rest!

Thank you Lissliss.

reddawg82 February 12 2011, 23:43:06 UTC

I was thinking how difficult the sense of smell could be, especially given the location you chose. But... I must say... fucking fantastic!
Some people just love she smell of books, but I didn't realize it could actually turn someone on. Then again, if Ems was in the queer section... and there are some pretty risque books there... I could totally understand why she needed Naomi, and needed her then.
Emily is a little fire pistol! So fucking hot!
Lovely!