.(Oneshot) The Last Memory

[le_chocolats]

Title: (Oneshot) The Last Memory
Author le_chocolats
Pairing: Inoobu, slight!Hikanoo
Rating: PG-13
Genre: romance, angst
Warning: mpreg
Summary: He was given the chance to rewind it, the life of the person he loves most, the love of his life...

Comments

[riinsomnia]

*sniff*
first time reading your fic becuse it's on community while i'm looking for angsty inoobu fic, so I landed here.
i love the yabu's POV but frustating T___T
if you gonna make the sequel of this, make it right away! i'd like to know <3

[morimotoaika]

TTATT I even thought that Inoo would remember yabu TT^TT and it will have a "happy ever after" ending.....

it is well made by the way!!

[nikenyk]

I feel like my heart's also breaking apart..
It's so.. sad ;_;

[1lively_sxol]

Hey! Finally able to comment on this lovely story of yours and I must say this was beyond sad. I don't know how you managed to write this without shedding a few tears.
Part of me understood why Yabu decided to let Inoo go but at the same time I wished he had kept faith and stuck with Inoo until he remembered him.
However I'm kinda wondering if in the future Inoo would realized that the child's Yabu's and no Hikaru's because as the child gets older he/she may resemble his biological parents and not Hikaru(if you catch what I mean?)
Nevertheless beautiful story. Love the flashback scenes; adds more depth to the whole story and also allows one to understand the situation in a artistic way.
Excellent Job ^u^

[au_gravityfree]

OMG HEARTBREAKING T_T

I think I understand Yabu's feeling he might think he's not worth Inoo.
He couldn't even protect Inoo.
And the part Inoo just recovered and found he's pregnant, he thought it's Hikarus' baby OMG OMG OMG
my heart broken into pieces OMG OMG OMG

And the part Yabu signed on divorce paper.
And the part Yabu said he's not Inoo's family, just nobody OMG OMG OMG

How could Yabu tell the hospital that Hikaru's Inoo's fiancee without bursting into tears?!

OMG AWESOME!!