I liked the encounter with one-night-stand guy. (Considering how many of those Jim must have had, it makes senes that he'd be running into them all the time, which could certainly be awkward if he was with his significant other.)
Oh, that's lovely :) You've captured the simple profoundness of domesticity very well!
considering they Spock spent fifty weeks a year
I think you forgot to delete either "they" or "Spock" :)
“I guess if you mean half-Vulcan, than sure.”
Should be "then," not "than." Typos are a bitch, I know - thought I'd let you now I caught these! You can delete this comment if you find it unsightly, even *wry grin*
Thanks so much for your edits-- and your rec! I'm so flattered. I re-read this and I'm a little skeptical towards it now. It feels incredibly OoC in some parts. (I suppose that's unavoidable since it's domestic!kink, but still.)
I like the idea of Kirk and Spock living together but it doesn't sit all that well with my canon!slut ways. I like the odd bit of fluff but half the appeal of their relationship is how charged it is
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considering they Spock spent fifty weeks a year
I think you forgot to delete either "they" or "Spock" :)
“I guess if you mean half-Vulcan, than sure.”
Should be "then," not "than." Typos are a bitch, I know - thought I'd let you now I caught these! You can delete this comment if you find it unsightly, even *wry grin*
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I like the idea of Kirk and Spock living together but it doesn't sit all that well with my canon!slut ways. I like the odd bit of fluff but half the appeal of their relationship is how charged it is ( ... )
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Thank you for the outstanding read. :)
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