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[leecherous]

Title: Smell
Author: Nihilism
Notes: This is the first drabble I've ever written. I think it's more of a ramble. But anyway, it was inspired and therefore FOR Jackie. I might make it longer and more literate when I feel the urge. For now, you can figure out what the pairing is.

Comments

[blackksails]

!!!!

Eeeee! Ohhowlovely. Drabbles are so fantastic, and you pull them off well, yesyesindeed. You know I loved it, and...for me? Awww how rad. So yes. That was hot. Really hot. Because..Iknowthepairingehehehehehehe. You're totally inspiring me, yo. Loveeee!

Oh, and thank youuuu :)

[leecherous]

Ehehehe. Thank you! We...are hopeless. Butthatsallright. Always glad to inspire with my dirty, dirty mind. Mmmm motor oil. Looove!

[dustbinflower]

Ahhhh steamy...lovely. I pictured a crammy car...fixing place, sorry for the lack of right words.. but ahh!! Imagining the puddles of motor oil on the ground, cigarette butts and two sweaty and incredebly sexy men going at it. Ahhh!! Brilliant, Jayme, brilliant.

As ever. I loved the Growlinghissingsnarlinglickingbiting and Thrustingwrithingsquirminghissingshaking bits, they gave the whole thing that whole sence of urgent need that I felt it had and that made it just...perfect. Yay!

love, Mike

[leecherous]

Hahahaha. Actually I was picturing the back of a car. A chopped black '54 Chevrolet to be precise. But an auto shop could be interesting too...mmm. In any case I've already started writing the whole thing now, making it a real story so...funtimes. Thanks!

Looooove!

[youshutup]

this is my new cop-out way of reviewing. enjoy.

[leecherous]

And this is my cop-out way of responding. Though, I suppose, for 105 words I shouldn't ask for much.

[__sadgirl]

HAHAHAHAHATIMMYSEX. iloveyouwithallmyheart. It was good. all shiveryooh for all...what, nine words of it? How about we expand? What if I send you cookies? Ohmygod, that would be like, girl scouts buying porn or something... okay, see, you've reduced me to this and i'm rambling and my house is making what, fucking popping noises, i don't know.

it was good and i want more but you tend to realize that that's always what you want to do. good job.

[leecherous]

105 words. I'm already expanding, though the cookies would be appreciated. I just couldn't leave it there. Did you, by chance, figure out who the other man is?

Popping noises are bad. Thanks.

[__sadgirl]

I'm unsure. It could be a lot of people. There were no distingushing marks... :(. Youre mean. I'm trying to visualiseeeeee but I cant and...Hm. What kindof cookies do you like?

[day_glo_mohawk]

Gah.

I love you. I really do.

This was awesome. I pictured Tim (obviously) and Lars? That's going on the tattooed hands remark. I can see this happening in the back of an old car, probably in a shop being worked on. Your writing paints such lovely pictures in my mind.

-Moria

[leecherous]

Nottt Lars. Good guess though! Hopefully the unabridged version will be finished in a couple days. Thanks!