GREAT chapter!!! It had all the things I wanted. Severus finally said I love you. We finally found out whether Harry's Patronus form could work against a Dementor, and Voldie finally bit it!!!\
Now just to find out whether his form can re-emerge...
Evil, wicked and wretched. *nods* that fits you perfectly at this point. ;p This was a great chapter. I loved the battle and Harry literally beating Voldy. poor little darklord never expected physical violence. *snort* it was great and I love it, and now I'm impatiently waiting for the rest of the story. Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! {{{{HUGS}}}}
You are so evil!!!! The only thing keeping me sane is that you promised to update again soon. Harry, my poor burnt and battered Harry, what did you do to him? Please sort this out!
K, so you'll be posting the next part now right? I mean, I'd hate to have to hunt you down or anything, not after you've given us such a wonderful tale...
Harry's battle tequnique... the fire breathing, the tornado... ootp film inspired? :)
Actually, I was on here to post the next part when I thought I'd take a peek at the comments. *big fat grin* I'll just run off and do that now. Hmm...I hadn't actually thought about the OOTP when I wrote the battle part. I think the idea for the tornado sparked because I later wanted Severus to see all the Glumbumbles piled in a heap, so that he could see them, understand Harry's grief and...holy shit I almost gave away way too much about the next part of the story. I just erased two sentences after realizing the 'whole' chapter wasn't up yet. Ok, my rambling will yet again get me into trouble.
*growl* my family is bitching about something as I type this and I may not post this in the next hour. *snarl* Today I swear....even if it's late today. *ducks and runs like Hell from Mavencree..*
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Now just to find out whether his form can re-emerge...
Please post soon!!!
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This was a great chapter. I loved the battle and Harry literally beating Voldy. poor little darklord never expected physical violence. *snort* it was great and I love it, and now I'm impatiently waiting for the rest of the story. Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! {{{{HUGS}}}}
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Harry's battle tequnique... the fire breathing, the tornado... ootp film inspired? :)
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Actually, I was on here to post the next part when I thought I'd take a peek at the comments. *big fat grin* I'll just run off and do that now.
Hmm...I hadn't actually thought about the OOTP when I wrote the battle part. I think the idea for the tornado sparked because I later wanted Severus to see all the Glumbumbles piled in a heap, so that he could see them, understand Harry's grief and...holy shit I almost gave away way too much about the next part of the story. I just erased two sentences after realizing the 'whole' chapter wasn't up yet. Ok, my rambling will yet again get me into trouble.
*growl* my family is bitching about something as I type this and I may not post this in the next hour. *snarl* Today I swear....even if it's late today. *ducks and runs like Hell from Mavencree..*
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