Bonsai - 3
Title: Bonsai
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Unrequited!TaeKey.
Warnings: It deals with pretty sensitive topics amongst fandoms. OOC overload. You have been warned.
Summary: Taemin grows a green house in the rooftop of the apartment he shares with Kibum.
A/N: Tha last two parts are events of the past, just so you know
( But then again, he thinks he has gotten all of us fooled... )
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Unrequited!TaeKey.
Warnings: It deals with pretty sensitive topics amongst fandoms. OOC overload. You have been warned.
Summary: Taemin grows a green house in the rooftop of the apartment he shares with Kibum.
A/N: Tha last two parts are events of the past, just so you know
( But then again, he thinks he has gotten all of us fooled... )
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The last part, the conversation part with changmin and JiYong was quite confusing to read. I couldn't really follow who, what,when and where they were talking about
But the rest is actually good. And I feel really bad for Taem.
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but uhm perhaps it's because I was the one who wrote this but I kind of understand how the thing's going on? but yeah, some parts have been left very unclearly, but I kind of tried leaving it to the reader's imagination to make up the scene and what both of them tried to say. yes i am aware they jumped from one topic to another lol and that's confusing as shit okay I also tried protraying their complex personalities, but how they still manage to understand the other...i still failed miserably
the one thing that I find most confusing is this paragraph:
“If they ever find out about it (about Jiyong/Henry/Changmin/Taemin being gay and/or Key and Amber being on a relationship) then her (Amber) career is destroyed and he’ll (Henry) get even more hate than he did back when he debuted (because of ( ... )
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