Comments | lemoluv22: Why Did I End Up Falling In Love With You? [chapter fic 8/9]

lemoluv22

Why Did I End Up Falling In Love With You? [chapter fic 8/9]

Jun 07, 2011 20:19

( chapter 8 )

dbsk/tvxq, yunjae, kitty!jaejoong, chaptered!fic, fanfic, nc17

Comments 30

uchie07 June 8 2011, 01:14:57 UTC

finally they have proper love making... so long for u to update this but thanx anyway ^_^

lemoluv22 June 9 2011, 01:37:54 UTC

thank you very much for waiting for so long <3

crimson_miharu June 8 2011, 01:36:28 UTC

spot

crimson_miharu June 8 2011, 02:24:44 UTC

Hmmm, they had sex which is a major improvement but I still wonder exactly how much Yunho cares for Jae and what's with the sad looks I've kinda forgotten some details about this story >.<. Fees dont live long and how could Jae forget his birthday O.o....I swear I had more questions but Im too sleepy to remember them >.<. I'm normally so eloquent too lol anywho hun I've missed this story and I look forward to the next update.

lemoluv22 June 9 2011, 01:39:30 UTC

Thank you for your questions, it helps for the next chapter! Hopefully i can end it well and there arent any open holes >< I hope what happened in the chapter didnt upset you too much because i certainly didnt want that T-T Thank you very much for sticking with the story through the ups and downs u.u <3

crimson_miharu June 9 2011, 02:02:59 UTC

Your very welcome! glad the questions will help you with the next chapter! I wasn't upset at all just more curious. We haven't really heard much of what Yunho really feels for Jae other than he cares alot more than he should, but what does that mean? It could be interpreted in so many ways once the lust has faded, would he regret being with Jae? Will he be awkward? Will he go back to putting distance between him and Jae (which would kill Jae)?

Oh dear.. I've added more questions >.< lol!

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kattan69 June 8 2011, 05:02:40 UTC

Finally, they both did 'IT'. Yunho must be waiting for his birthday to do that...most probably thinking Jae is now old enough to have 'sex' with him...hehehe.

lemoluv22 June 9 2011, 01:40:08 UTC

hahaha im glad i made him older so that the sex didnt seem /that/ bad :3 Thanks for commenting <3

be_ddelusionall June 8 2011, 05:51:46 UTC

wow

this is like ... I can't even describe it.
but this chapter and the last chapter separated the fee/person thing for me in this story. It's what a Fee was made for. Their only desire and the only thing they have to live for.

so good
*loves*

lemoluv22 June 9 2011, 01:40:55 UTC

are you sure it was good...? o.o your comment frightens me and maybe i didnt do that good of a job >

be_ddelusionall June 9 2011, 04:40:03 UTC

why does it frighten you?
It's good!
*reads again just because*

lemoluv22 June 9 2011, 04:52:24 UTC

oh haha ^^ well it made me feel like i wrote something wrong or something >< but seriously, im really happy you added the "*loves*" at the end <3 <3

zoevo June 8 2011, 06:56:16 UTC

You updated!!! I missed this fic!

zoevo June 8 2011, 07:34:27 UTC

YAY for YunJae's love making!
I love how you involved Jae's tail into their action since tail is the thing I find most special when it comes to kitty-smut.
Among all the fluff and cute Jae, I still feel sad whenever the fee life is mentioned. What an unfortunate creature!
btw, I wonder what made Yunho changed his mind and cared so much for Jae during the last few months.
Thank you so much for the update, <3!

lemoluv22 June 9 2011, 01:41:16 UTC

haha yes! after such a long time!! >< thank you for commenting and reading <3