Comments | leondacter: Vignette (in five minutes).

leondacter

Vignette (in five minutes).

Nov 14, 2006 11:38

( Alan buries his own dog in the potato garden the day before his eighth birthday. )

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ulyart November 14 2006, 22:37:51 UTC

Beautiful language, very hypnotic!

A comment! leondacter November 14 2006, 23:44:35 UTC

It's my day off, and I was getting tired of focussing on screenwriting; I'm working at a hotel in Brentwood now for a steady paycheck. I decided I'd just write one of my angst-ridden tableaux to get the wordiness out of my system and refocus myself. Totally self-indulgent, but it was a good five-minutes with a different character and some poesy.

Also, I had Shakespeare's first sonnet rattling rhythmically around in my head.

Re: A comment! ulyart November 15 2006, 00:24:09 UTC

I decided I'd just write one of my angst-ridden tableaux to get the wordiness out of my system and refocus myself.

I know what you mean. Partly inspired by you, I just wrote a rhythmic wordy post. It's fun, but I think it might be harder reading than what I write normally.

leondacter November 15 2006, 16:05:34 UTC

Also, I think I stole (and bastardized a bit) this phrasing from you:

each part aglow in the humming warmth of the sunlight

That's right out of Vincennes and the forest. Plagiarized.