FIC: Four Times It Didn't Need To Be Said, And One Time It Did

[leopardwrites]

Title: Four Times It Didn't Need To Be Said, And One Time It Did

Pairing: Sherlock/John; background John/Mary

Rating: PG-13

Warning/Spoiler: Minor character death

Note: First fic! Or at least, first I've posted properly for the world to judge... Many thanks to imyourheroine for listening to me whine and picking out my weird grammar issues (some of which I

Comments

[maxine_mirkwood]

This is really beautiful, gorgeous characterisation of both Sherlock and John and such an utterly believable examination of their feelings for each other. Well done.

[leopardwrites]

Oh wow, thank you! I'm blushing. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and found it believable!

[willidan]

Lovely. I think this is the only time when I find Sherlock adorable. :)

[leopardwrites]

Thanks :) aw, I always find Sherlock adorable, once you get through all the layers of bastard to the adorable core ;)

[laurab1]

Lovely! Well done, and welcome to the madhouse :)

[leopardwrites]

Thank you, and thanks for the welcome! I do love this madhouse very much, guess that means I belong here then!

[mildred_bobbin]

wonderful story! The writing is superb, everything beautifully described and imagined and the characterisation was spot on. The earlier scenes, so painful and angsty - poor Mary, unable to compete with Sherlock - and the ending was so beautiful, achingly romantic. Great job.

[leopardwrites]

Thank you for your lovely comment! I agree, poor Mary, she really got a bad deal in this. She gets a bad deal in most fics, one day I will do her justice.

[dioscureantwins]

Wonderful story from start to finish. Sherlock the great manipulator and John willingly following.
The language was beautiful and the whole story send a big grin of satisfaction to my face.

Thank you and goodbye!

[leopardwrites]

Thank you and hello! Glad it gave you a grin!