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May 27, 2010 11:52

a starry night
a peaceful sky
a storm within
a young girl cries

who she is
what she can be
born to fly
but never free

falling in circles
she tries to stand
knocked back down
bu an unseen hand

so much to live for
so much to do
but often death seems better
so she continues to lose

lose hope in humanity
hope in her life
all of her willpower
to not grab up the knife

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thelonelyowl May 27 2010, 22:52:24 UTC
i love your poem. very well written.

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letgolaughing May 27 2010, 23:12:03 UTC
thanks!

i wrote it awhile ago but just re-discovered it in my journal today.

hope all is well with you?

xx

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thelonelyowl May 29 2010, 01:27:55 UTC
yeah i'm doing pretty good. how are you doing?

you should put up some more stuff that you write. i wish i could write poetry like that!

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letgolaughing May 30 2010, 11:28:31 UTC
Right now, at this very exact moment in time, for however long it may or may not last, I am doing great :]

And maybe...I don't write often I usually draw/make collages. It's just sometimes as I'm drawing the words end up coming out in my pictures so I can make something off of what I'm drawing/sketching.

I have a couple more though. Maybe I'll post something else later...and thanks too :]

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pinkxbubblesx May 28 2010, 00:53:10 UTC
I love this <3

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letgolaughing May 28 2010, 08:48:36 UTC
thanks!

xx

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